"An expelled Potter is a much happier Draco." This sentence is made of win. I am not sure why. I just like it a whole lot.
"As a fun little side-project, I’m looking into ways to destroy that hideous Black women’s portrait."
AN EXCELLENT SIDE-PROJECT, I APPROVE, SIR DRACO. Women's should be 'woman's' here, by the way.
ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER. I like Draco's perspective. It doesn't actually seem all that different from Harry's. Except of course he's seeing things differently; it's just that he doesn't have a very different voice. Perhaps that is because Harry and Draco are Actually Not So Different. -suspense-
quite a predicament Draco's father. keep him in Draco can live his own life but if he's out that down the tubes. nice chap.
"Malfoys are want to do"
In this case, "want" should be spelled "wont" as in "It was his wont"
Author's Response: I have fixed this. Thank you. I really appreciate you pointing this out to me. I knew something about that word didn't look right when I gave this chapter a re-read. I just forgot to take the time to investigate.
Well, it certainly seems that Severus thinks Draco is worth saving. Question is, can he relaly trust him? Malfoys are usually shifty. I suppose we'll see, right?
Interesting look at a fun, ambiguous Draco. Snooty, pampered, but not a killer. It cracks me up that he can't stand the portrait either and is working to remove it. In one fell swoop he'll make up for a lot with Harry if he can get rid of Mrs. Black.
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