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HARRY'S DOOMED.
This is terrible! I was soo completely shocked! I really hope you update this soon, i want some to be in contact with Harry, Poor thing! He doesnt even realize what's going on. He certainly didn't expect this. I was wondering if you were going to have ron andhermione's reaction to this? It would definitely add some insight! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, we can only hope that someone rescues him! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you thought it was worth it. Personally, I would have been ticked off that I had to wait this long for a 2700 word chapter! Next chapter will not be a 5 month wait....I promise!
So glad you updated. Author's Response: I was surprised by Harry's treatment, as well. I was going for shocking, something with a sudden and immediate impact that would happen before Harry even had time to adjust to his new environment. Thanks for reviewing!
Please update soon, I was so pleased to see your story there! Oh, now I'm hoping that he IS Snape's son, and that Snape rescues him! I hate Scrimgeour! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope to update soon. I have already started chapter 8, so hopefully the wait won't be long.
Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's state of well-being is in great jeapardy! Thanks for your comment about the dialog. I feel like I really struggle with that. I love dialog and feel that sometimes I don't put in enough descriptive paragraphs. I like to have my characters talking and doing versus the writer describing everything in painstaking detail. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: What? The Ministry do something illegal and/or unethical????
(It's descent, not decent) Author's Response: Oh! Thanks for the correction. I will fix that ASAP! I will never abandon a fic. This is the only one I have on P&S. I have another fic on ff.net under the same author name. It is called "Taking Back Sunday." It has been forever since I updated that one, too. If I abandon a fic, I will take it down completely rather than leaving it hanging in cyberland for eternity. Thanks for the review. |
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