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Title: Chapter 7 18 Aug 2010 2:45 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    OH NO.

    HARRY'S DOOMED.
Title: Chapter 7 29 Jul 2009 2:40 am
Reviewer: amainage (Signed) [Report This]
    very eye opening, nice chap.
Title: Chapter 7 07 Apr 2009 9:03 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, I knew something bad was going to happen but i never expected this!
    This is terrible!
    I was soo completely shocked!
    I really hope you update this soon, i want some to be in contact with Harry, Poor thing! He doesnt even realize what's going on. He certainly didn't expect this. I was wondering if you were going to have ron andhermione's reaction to this? It would definitely add some insight!

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 7 28 Oct 2008 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Whoa, poor Harry. I'm sure Snape and Dumbledore will get him out of there ASAP, though.

    Author's Response: Yes, we can only hope that someone rescues him!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 7 28 Oct 2008 10:28 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad to see an update. The wait was well worth it! This chapter was really good. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you thought it was worth it.  Personally, I would have been ticked off that I had to wait this long for a 2700 word chapter!  Next chapter will not be a 5 month wait....I promise!
Title: Chapter 7 28 Oct 2008 6:17 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I was surprised by Harry's treatment. I thought it might be rough, but I didn't expect this! Hope someone (like Snape) comes to the rescue soon.

    So glad you updated.

    Author's Response: I was surprised by Harry's treatment, as well.  I was going for shocking, something with a sudden and immediate impact that would happen before Harry even had time to adjust to his new environment.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 7 28 Oct 2008 3:47 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Poor Harry! They left him starkers!

    Please update soon, I was so pleased to see your story there!

    Oh, now I'm hoping that he IS Snape's son, and that Snape rescues him!

    I hate Scrimgeour!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  I hope to update soon.  I have already started chapter 8, so hopefully the wait won't be long.
Title: Chapter 7 28 Oct 2008 3:35 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, my! Talk about being railroaded! I don't want to think about what state Harry will be in by the time that potion is completed and Severus finds out just what his relationship to Harry is. A very well written story. I love the way you have done the dialog.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's state of well-being is in great jeapardy!   Thanks for your comment about the dialog.  I feel like I really struggle with that.  I love dialog and feel that sometimes I don't put in enough descriptive paragraphs.  I like to have my characters talking and doing versus the writer describing everything in painstaking detail.  Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 7 28 Oct 2008 2:25 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    I would think that Scrimgeour's treatment of Harry would be illegal. He's a ward not a criminal.

    Author's Response: What?  The Ministry do something illegal and/or unethical???? 
Title: Chapter 7 28 Oct 2008 1:53 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was afraid you had abandoned this fic, and it's very good, an unusual take.

    (It's descent, not decent)

    Author's Response: Oh!  Thanks for the correction.  I will fix that ASAP!  I will never abandon a fic.  This is the only one I have on P&S.  I have another fic on ff.net under the same author name.  It is called "Taking Back Sunday."  It has been forever since I updated that one, too.  If I abandon a fic, I will take it down completely rather than leaving it hanging in cyberland for eternity.  Thanks for the review.

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