Hmmm, let's see, it's been 2 years since the last update, forget it!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 04 Nov 2012 9:13 am
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| Reviewer: Luna (Anonymous)
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I really love your story! It is a great premise, very believable characters, and beautifully written. Please update soon!
Now that you've gotten this story well and truly underway, I'm addicted to it. You have an excellent set-up, and your characters are believable. I am dying for us to find out just WHY Scrimgeour is behaving the way he is right now. Also I'm curious to find out how Severus became Harry's father, since he seems to have no memory of any physical involvement with Lily. You have obviously set this up so that Harry will prove to be Severus' son. How you will prove this is so, I can hardly wait to find out! Thanks for all your hard work on this story; please know it's appreciated.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 15 Jan 2011 6:58 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 9
| 06 Dec 2010 10:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying this story very much and hope to see more soon [GIANT HINT IN CASE YOU MISSED IT!!!].
blah blah blah POLITICS THAT MINISTER GUY IS UP TO SOMETHING blah blah blah Snape and Dumbledore Have Talks
THE SUSPENSE. IT IS KILLING ME. This is really quite good. -bookmarks-
Author's Response: Thanks for all of your reviews. I will fix the errors you found as soon as I can. I love constructive criticism, but I also love hearing what people liked! So, thanks for both!
Oh, ack! Harry HAS to be ... well, rescued ASAP! I'm worried this is all gonna take to long. I hope you'll be able to update fairly soon!
I'm glad you are still working on this fic. I did think I might never see anything more, so my perseverance has paid off. I am still wondering and what the relation might be between Harry and Severus, but more compelling at the moment is the Minister's motivations. I look forward to more sometime in the future.
Author's Response: thanks for the review. The Minister's motivations will be brought to light very soon!
good chapter. looking forward to the next one
The minister needs a boot in the ass.
I hope Albus & Snape can get him out of there soon.
Could Arthur Weasley visit Harry? Or at least find out where in the ministry he is?
What about Dobby? Could he get to Harry?
Author's Response: Oh, those are all good suggestions. My thinking is, at this point, that Albus does not want to anger the Minister any more than he already is by sending in secret visitor's. What if someone was caught? But, yes, if things continue to get worse for Harry, sending in help may be necessary. thanks for the review.
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