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"As a fun little side-project, I’m looking into ways to destroy that hideous Black women’s portrait." AN EXCELLENT SIDE-PROJECT, I APPROVE, SIR DRACO. Women's should be 'woman's' here, by the way. ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER. I like Draco's perspective. It doesn't actually seem all that different from Harry's. Except of course he's seeing things differently; it's just that he doesn't have a very different voice. Perhaps that is because Harry and Draco are Actually Not So Different. -suspense-
SUCH AN AWESOME LINE. Except it should read "Well, it could be because I have anxiety!" to really make sense with the exclamation mark, otherwise it's phrased like an angry question...but with no question mark! (Scandalous, I know.) Also, D'AWWW HARRY. Anyhow, I shall Continue Reading Now.
Author's Response: thanks for the review. The Minister's motivations will be brought to light very soon!
I hope Albus & Snape can get him out of there soon. Could Arthur Weasley visit Harry? Or at least find out where in the ministry he is? What about Dobby? Could he get to Harry? Author's Response: Oh, those are all good suggestions. My thinking is, at this point, that Albus does not want to anger the Minister any more than he already is by sending in secret visitor's. What if someone was caught? But, yes, if things continue to get worse for Harry, sending in help may be necessary. thanks for the review.
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens if the potion proves that Harry is indeed Snape's son. I hope either way, that Harry gets out of there. Looking forward to the next chappie.
Author's Response: Yes, Snape can really be a pain in the arse when he wants to be. However, out of a sense of duty, loyalty and as an Order member, Snape will do whatever Albus asks him to do.
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