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Title: Chapter 4 18 Aug 2010 2:31 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    "An expelled Potter is a much happier Draco." This sentence is made of win. I am not sure why. I just like it a whole lot.

    "As a fun little side-project, I’m looking into ways to destroy that hideous Black women’s portrait."
    AN EXCELLENT SIDE-PROJECT, I APPROVE, SIR DRACO. Women's should be 'woman's' here, by the way.

    ANOTHER EXCELLENT CHAPTER. I like Draco's perspective. It doesn't actually seem all that different from Harry's. Except of course he's seeing things differently; it's just that he doesn't have a very different voice. Perhaps that is because Harry and Draco are Actually Not So Different. -suspense-
Title: Chapter 3 18 Aug 2010 2:26 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    “Well, could it be because I have anxiety!”

    SUCH AN AWESOME LINE. Except it should read "Well, it could be because I have anxiety!" to really make sense with the exclamation mark, otherwise it's phrased like an angry question...but with no question mark! (Scandalous, I know.)

    Also, D'AWWW HARRY.

    Anyhow, I shall Continue Reading Now.
Title: Chapter 2 18 Aug 2010 2:20 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    THIS STORY IT IS GOOD I SHALL FINISH READING IT NOW and maybe even give a useful review.
Title: Chapter 9 17 Aug 2010 10:40 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, ack! Harry HAS to be ... well, rescued ASAP! I'm worried this is all gonna take to long. I hope you'll be able to update fairly soon!
Title: Chapter 9 17 Aug 2010 8:39 am
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you are still working on this fic. I did think I might never see anything more, so my perseverance has paid off. I am still wondering and what the relation might be between Harry and Severus, but more compelling at the moment is the Minister's motivations. I look forward to more sometime in the future.

    Author's Response: thanks for the review.  The Minister's motivations will be brought to light very soon!
Title: Chapter 9 17 Aug 2010 3:58 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter. looking forward to the next one
Title: Chapter 9 17 Aug 2010 2:21 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    The minister needs a boot in the ass.
    I hope Albus & Snape can get him out of there soon.
    Could Arthur Weasley visit Harry? Or at least find out where in the ministry he is?
    What about Dobby? Could he get to Harry?

    Author's Response: Oh, those are all good suggestions.  My thinking is, at this point, that Albus does not want to anger the Minister any more than he already is by sending in secret visitor's.  What if someone was caught?  But, yes, if things continue to get worse for Harry, sending in help may be necessary.  thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 9 17 Aug 2010 1:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great to see an update! Glad that you haven't abandoned this fic.

    I'm looking forward to seeing what happens if the potion proves that Harry is indeed Snape's son. I hope either way, that Harry gets out of there.

    Looking forward to the next chappie.
Title: Chapter 9 16 Aug 2010 10:22 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i cant believee snape.if he learn harry is his son i dont think snape help to harry.snape is really hate harry.poor harry.

    Author's Response: Yes, Snape can really be a pain in the arse when he wants to be.  However, out of a sense of duty, loyalty and as an Order member, Snape will do whatever Albus asks him to do. 
Title: Chapter 8 07 Mar 2010 4:41 am
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    How is he going to hide things in a letter to Snape? This is really good! Please update soon!

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