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man ur good.
This is terrible! I was soo completely shocked! I really hope you update this soon, i want some to be in contact with Harry, Poor thing! He doesnt even realize what's going on. He certainly didn't expect this. I was wondering if you were going to have ron andhermione's reaction to this? It would definitely add some insight! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh no, oh no, oh no..!! I have a bad feeling about this!!
Oh no, oh no, oh no..!! I have a bad feeling about this!!
Please update soon! You have me totally hooked! Poor poor harry!!
"Shutter", should be "shudder" "ear full", should be "earful" Otherwise, I love this story & particularly like that you don't bother to explain the link between Harry & Snape Author's Response: Thank you! I will fix those errors asap! It never fails! I use spellchecker, which of course does not caught EVERYTHING. I read through the chapter over a dozen times and yet there are still mistakes. Oh well...what can you do? Again, thank you.
I feel bad for Draco too. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Yes, we can only hope that someone rescues him! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you thought it was worth it. Personally, I would have been ticked off that I had to wait this long for a 2700 word chapter! Next chapter will not be a 5 month wait....I promise! |
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