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Title: Past Imperfect 29 Dec 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that they are finally going to get to heal. I'm very excited that you mentioned having Sev's memory's of a two year-old Harry next chapter because I am such a sucker for baby stories.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Then you'll love the next chapter, it has lots of baby Harry in it.  And if you like little Harry stories, you should read my Never Again series, it's all about Harry as a toddler and a small child, it starts with a thirteen month old Harry, Lily, and Severus in Where Shadows Go. Thanks for rreading!
Title: Past Imperfect 13 Jul 2008 7:26 am
Reviewer: supergirl_3684 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww...now i'm all teary eyed!

    Author's Response: yeah, this was a sad part, the two of them have some issues to work out.
Title: Past Imperfect 02 Jun 2008 8:06 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Well-written chapter. I love it when you get to the emotional heart of it all.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I think the emotional parts are one of my strengths, I like to make my readers FEEL things.
Title: Past Imperfect 27 Mar 2008 1:12 am
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    sev is right to be outraged and feel remorseful

    BUT he cannot help that he did not know he was the boys dad

    dumbledore should have done more - he really should

    trying to picture them all at target is hilarious

    Author's Response:

    I know, I started laughing when I wrote that . . .man if I ever saw Sev and Harry pushing a cart, i think I'd just die right there!

    And you know how Sev is, he feels guilty over things he cannot help, much like another relation you know!  And Dumbledore was  a manipulative old goat!

Title: Past Imperfect 20 Mar 2008 3:16 pm
Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor kid, he's got so much emotional baggage to deal with! I'm glad that he finally told someone though, he needed to. Wonderfully done!

    Author's Response: Yes, he does and thanks again!
Title: Past Imperfect 04 Mar 2008 8:52 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, so beautiful! My favorite line was:
    "It's all right, son. Cry if you need to, I won't drown."
    I found that so gorgeously sweet. And now I'm crying, blast you! :)
    Thanks so much for the beautiful story, I love it!
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Aww, I know, I'm a sucker for writing those tearjerker scenes.  And there will be more to come soon!
Title: Past Imperfect 04 Mar 2008 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    You really have me hooked, I can't stop reading ^_^. Thanks for updating so quickly!

    Author's Response: You're so welcome! And I'll be posting a lot more up here today and tomorrow since I'm going on vacation for two weeks and I don't want to leave all of you hanging!
Title: Past Imperfect 04 Mar 2008 8:41 am
Reviewer: beckettsgirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this fic so far. I have to tell you I was a bit nervous when America was mentioned. So many fics start off great and go down hill once everyone gets to America, but your's is still going strong. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like what else I'm going to do with this fic, it's mainly one about having a family and the relationship between a father and son.  I plan on you learning about Sev's past as well as Harry's.
Title: Past Imperfect 04 Mar 2008 5:35 am
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! I get home and more incredible chapters are waiting for me... THANK YOU! This story is Brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thank you for saying so!! You made my day!
Title: Past Imperfect 04 Mar 2008 4:42 am
Reviewer: CraftyMomChick (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving this story. I especially like the interaction between Harry and Severus. Its not the typical interaction that is usually portrayed and I like it. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'l glad you're enjoying this.  I tried to do something different with them, since most of the other stories have them fighting like cats and dogs before they finally decide to get along, but to me that would be unrealistic here, given the circumstances.  Yes, Severus was strict and nasty to Harry in class, but he wasn't abusive like the Dursleys and therefore Harry can get past it and see his father in a different light, as Poppy encouraged him to do.  After all, he's the only family Harry has that's willing to care for him, and he did have a reason for acting that way.

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