Just read your story straight though and think its wonderful! Its very orginal and well writen.
I really want to see Snape beat the sh*t out of Devon though.
Thanks for sharing and update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot and you know you're not the only one who wants to see that happen. I may or may not have that happen in this fic though, since I'm considering a sequel. But we'll see.
| Title: Beagles, Brooms, and Trouble
| 21 Mar 2008 4:32 am
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| Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous)
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Yes, it was. If I'd spoken to MY dad that way, I'd of been dead and buried. Loved this chapter, it was hilarious! That Rosie!
Author's Response: I know, beagles are trouble, but you gotta love them! Thanks for your review!
| Title: Promises To Keep
| 21 Mar 2008 4:29 am
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| Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous)
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What an awesome chapter! I love it all, Mia, Sev making pancakes, Harry playing Operation and of course the beagle puppy! How sweet! I love beagles! Wish I had Sev for a dad! LOL!
Author's Response: Great and I loved writing this one, it really made me laugh. I love beagles too, of course! And I agree with you about Sev!
| Title: The Morning After
| 21 Mar 2008 2:26 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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Great job on this chapter - I'm really glad Severus calmed down enough to ask Harry about what happened. I can't wait to see what it is he says to the MacIntyres XD
Author's Response: I'll tell you one thing, they aren't going to like it! Thanks for your review also!
Yay! I'm relieved that Severus didn't end up spanking Harry right off since he would surely regret it after he found out the truth from Harry. Excellent chapter and I hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: Too true and Harry was grateful as well, because he really didn't deserve to get in trouble.
| Title: Sev Meets the Big Bad Wolf
| 20 Mar 2008 11:43 pm
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| Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter! I am loving this story! Especially the end, that was so touching! Aww!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I enjoyed writing this one, it was a lot of fun!
| Title: Always There
| 20 Mar 2008 11:37 pm
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| Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous)
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Poor Sev! I feel so bad for him having to live with such a beastly father! Ugh! Somebody ought to beat the man senseless! Lucky he has Lily. And I really like how you portryaed James, Sirius and Remus. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I can't agree more! maybe I'll write a fic where somebody gives Tobias his just deserts!
| Title: The Morning After
| 20 Mar 2008 6:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Oh, I am relieved that Severus didn't give out any punishment before Harry explained everything. The chapter was overall very nice and I hope that you get the new update soon, as fast as the last one! :)
Author's Response: Yes, I'm working on it now and if I get it done, I'll post it tonight, since this is my day off and I can write all day if I feel like it. Glad you liked this one, it was interesting to write, since I've never been in that situation myself, but I've known plenty of friends and relatives who have.
I glad Remus was there to make Sev cool down enough to listen to his son. A flare up between those two this early in their relationship would have been bad.
But I would have thought the police would have had some very strong questions for Severus about where his son had been and how he got the drink. Harry could have been taken in has a juvenile.He was lucky (or if he had an irresponsible parent, unlucky).
Author's Response: You're right, and Sev knew that, which was why he asked Remus to be there the next morning. As for the police, yes, they could have gone after Harry, but the officer was a nice guy and let it go this once, but Mike does get in trouble as you'll see in the next chapter.
| Title: An Issue of Trust
| 20 Mar 2008 3:21 pm
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| Reviewer: summergirl36 (Anonymous)
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Grr...I hate the DEath Eaters, they all ought to commit suicide! But that spell was awfully scary! Loved how Sev helped him with his homework and came in to comfort him after the nightmare though! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I agree and thanks for all your reviews!
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