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Title: Moony Arrives 18 Mar 2008 2:05 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really great chapter, it's nice to see Harry and Sev doing some of the day to day things together like chores and Harry pestering Sev to let him sleep at a friends house. I love the fact that Remus and Severus are friends in your story and not the typical Sev is just going to tolerate him because he's important to Harry. Nice to see that he was made the godfather instead of Sirius, I know he has his furry little problem, but it's always made much more sense to me. Keep up the awesome work and please please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: I will, I should have another chapter up sometime tomorrow, if I can mnage to finish it then! And I agree with you about Remus, I always liked him and thought he got a terrible deal, much like Severus, in the books.  It always made sense to me to have Remus and Sev be friends because in a sense, both of them were outcasts and Remus didn't seem the type to go in for pranking and tormenting, he always seemed more mature than James or Sirius.  Also, since the Wolfsbane Potion is so complex to brew, I felt there had to be another reason other than the standard Dumbledore ordered him to for Sev to spend precious time making said potion for Remus.  Of course he would do it for his friend.
Title: Sparks 17 Mar 2008 7:34 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Shame on you Harry for having such a smart mouth. Yay Remus is coming!! :)

    Author's Response: Yup, just wait the wolf's coming!  hey how did you like the chapter where Sev met Remus when he was a werewolf? It was called Sev Meets the Big Bad Wolf!
Title: Sparks 17 Mar 2008 5:49 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the ending of this chapter! Glad to see Harry might be getting a bit of his magic back. The first part felt a bit like it was following "tell, don't show" instead of the writer's axiom "show, don't tell" - although sometimes you do need to sum up in order to advance the action quickly, and from your last sentence, I gather that more action is coming...

    Author's Response: Yes, and this is really a transition chapter, you'll see why when you read the next one!
Title: Sparks 17 Mar 2008 5:06 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry really needs to clue in a stop being a smartarse! :oP But not really, because I am partial to Harry and his smart aleckyness. Glad Sev took Auntie's advice and talked to Harry. I feel bad for the kid though. What a meanie Sev is! LOL Great chapter as usual. Thanks, Snapegirl! :O)

    Author's Response: Yes, but well, he IS thirteen and god knows, at that age we all were like that! I know I was, heaven help my parents! And my thirteen-year-old niece....she'd drive me insane if I were HER mom.  And yes, Sev can be quite mean LOL, but hopefully Harry will learn his lesson . . .eventually ...like maybe when he's 21? We hope! Thanks as always for reviewing :)) Lots of popcorn and Sev smiles at you too!
Title: Done With It 17 Mar 2008 5:06 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Yippee! I'm doing a happy dance in my chair!

    I've always disliked the dichotomy of Dumbledore's treatment of the students. Of course, that's one of the things that makes him such a powerful character, but still...

    Cheers for Snape and his decision here.

    Author's Response: Yes and I did too, which is why I wrote it that way! Don't you just love it when Sev gets all riled? I could practically see steam coming out of his ears while I was writing this.  Yes, I'm a weird author, I visualize scenes in my head.  Thanks for the awesome reviews by the way!
Title: Lily's Gift 17 Mar 2008 4:56 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa! When I read the part of him needing glasses at 17 months I thought it was a typo, but boy oh boy, you blew that theory right out of the water didn't you? He was two at the time of the attack?

    Time for me to scurry to the next chapter and discover more of the truth.

    Author's Response: Nope and just wait till you see what happens next!  Yes, I made him two in this story, to allow for more bonding between child and parents!
Title: Harsh Truths 17 Mar 2008 4:44 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Well done of Snape to give Harry a target for his anger and grief.

    And poor Harry. He's right in a way. His magic is the only thing he thinks makes him redeemable as a human. Now to have that yanked away. Snape is going to have quite the battle ahead of him.

    Author's Response: Yes, but it will work out eventually, as you will see.  And Snape is a very good instinctive psychologist.  Thanks for your review!
Title: A New Friend 17 Mar 2008 3:43 am
Reviewer: InTheShadows (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter.

    I thought Harry lost his magic, so how can he fly on a broom at all?

    Author's Response: He still has a remnant of it, so that's how he can still fly.  Sorry about the confusion! And thanks for reviewing!
Title: A New Friend 16 Mar 2008 8:43 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was cute that they took the pup flying too. Another nicely done chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I love dogs so that's why most of my stories have dogs and cats in them!
Title: Promises To Keep 16 Mar 2008 8:04 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww such a cute puppy! That was nice to add in a part about the Crocodile Hunter. I was sad when he died. And this was another great chapter!

    Author's Response: yeah, I always loved the Crocodile Hunter.  it was such a tragedy when he died.

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