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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Uh, what an smarting scene you turned into a cliff- and by his own father. Snapegirl is right; a one-armed hug would be good to give Harry now -poor chap. Doesn't Sev see how skinny, small and touch-starved/scared of contact Harry is? and that his clothes is deplorable? What about Explaining to the little buggar what Parsletongue Is, how you 'use' it, what it comes from, the social stigma, how to live with it... Fatherly protection is a lot more than just walloping because you can. Please, dear writeress, if you don't want us to keep hoping for(much,much) more, would you just send a page hereto with the plot wrapped up in some long paragraphs, because normally I can live with an interesting story hanging unfinished, but your story is unique and hopeful, and touched my heart. I crave a gentle and solid curtain-fall by the creator, not just this....torture of silence. Please, talented authors, write fewer stories , and then complete them, I beg of you. Alas, Best regards from a sad reader.
I hope you will get back to it at one point! Love the idea!
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