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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Author's Response: Yeah, this chapter was written three weaks ago... cringes... I've read them so many times that I'm bored and I know what it should say... so my silly brain sees the correct spelling etc. Stupid... know.
Author's Response: you can say that again!!
Author's Response: You'ld just have to wait and find out...
ARGH! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! lol, great chapter, keep up the good work! Author's Response: Sorry about the delay... I had to go back and check my writing. And I couldn't find the phrase normal face... Just know I needed a word to differentate the 'identities of Harry. I think in the area you may have been looking at Harry sees his original face, ie the one he was born with, biologoically speaking as his normal face even though he's been living with Harry's face for all his life.
Great update and I am looking forward to more!! I really , really like your Harry. Not because of his wandless transfiguration -- although that is cool too -- but because of his inner monologue, it's so very 12 year old boy -- playful, creative and authentic. Author's Response: Or the inner monologue... could be the author's strange, twisted sense of humour. :) Glad you like. :)
Author's Response: I've updated.... I hope you continue to read and enjoy. :)
You need to add 'is' in there for this sentence to make sense, making it "Sometimes all a pain riddled Gryffindor cub needs, is to leave his wounds to someone else." and i'm not sure that it sounds right to say that they were locked in a physiological duel unless they were doing something other that arguing, perhaps you meant psychological duel? Author's Response: Yah... oops... I got a little bored waiting for my beta.... and just updated I've checked the next chapter a little better.
Author's Response: Interesting stories always have interactions interactions.... you therefore should enjoy the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hmmm.... I don't think his 'face' will let him hide for much longer...:) Although not being Harry Potter, comes with certain advantages... like loosing Lockhart (I just can't stand the man - and he's fictional!) |
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