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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Title: I Wish I Might 07 Sep 2008 3:18 am
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Humerous, "I wish I just culd be normal" while he turns water into cola. :)
Title: I Wish I Might 03 Jun 2008 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    About beta-ing: I have that problem too sometimes, when I don't see my mistakes. The trick is to wait some time, like a day or two before you go back to the text and look for errors. You'll have enough distance from it to see more errors. This only increases with time, so if you post a chapter, and come back a week, month, or year later, they will show up.

    Author's Response: Yeah, this chapter was written three weaks ago... cringes... I've read them so many times that I'm bored and I know what it should say... so my silly brain sees the correct spelling etc. Stupid...  know.
Title: I Wish I Might 31 May 2008 7:27 am
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    uh oh

    Author's Response: you can say that again!!
Title: I Wish I Might 27 May 2008 8:49 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmmm. this is very interesting i wonder what harry will do now

    Author's Response: You'ld just have to wait and find out...
Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    ...er...normal face? What does that mean?

    ARGH! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! lol, great chapter, keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Sorry about the delay... I had to go back and check my writing. And I couldn't find the phrase normal face... Just know I needed a word to differentate the 'identities of Harry. I think in the area you may have been looking at Harry sees his original face, ie the one he was born with, biologoically speaking as his normal face even though he's been living with Harry's face for all his life.

Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 8:20 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dun!
    Great update and I am looking forward to more!! I really , really like your Harry. Not because of his wandless transfiguration -- although that is cool too -- but because of his inner monologue, it's so very 12 year old boy -- playful, creative and authentic.

    Author's Response:

    Or the inner monologue... could be the author's strange, twisted sense of humour. :) Glad you like. :)

Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 4:24 pm
Reviewer: Akili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant, especially that last sentence. I do hope you update fast, after such a cliffhanger.

    Author's Response: I've updated.... I hope you continue to read and enjoy. :)
Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    “Sometimes all a pain riddled Gryffindor cub needs to leave his wounds to someone else,”
    You need to add 'is' in there for this sentence to make sense, making it "Sometimes all a pain riddled Gryffindor cub needs, is to leave his wounds to someone else."
    and i'm not sure that it sounds right to say that they were locked in a physiological duel unless they were doing something other that arguing, perhaps you meant psychological duel?

    Author's Response:

    Yah... oops...

     I got a little bored waiting for my beta.... and just updated

    I've checked the next chapter a little better.

Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 2:58 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lots of interesting interactions going on here--Harry and Ron, Harry and Snape, Snape and Dumbledore, etc. I'm intrigued by what you are doing with the Slytherins--having Blaise get the headmaster and then having the Slytherins catch Harry changing his face.

    Author's Response: Interesting stories always have interactions interactions.... you therefore should enjoy the next chapter. 
Title: I Wish I Might 25 May 2008 10:03 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    [The below was rhetorical by the way *grins*] Poor Harry, i hope Snape and Dumbles admit the truth to him soon. At least his new found ability would allow him to run away completely if things ever got too much for him but still be in plain sight and safe.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm.... I don't think his 'face' will let him hide for much longer...:) Although not being Harry Potter, comes with certain advantages... like loosing Lockhart (I just can't stand the man - and he's fictional!)


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