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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Author's Response: Read next chpater is all I can comment. Snape has his reasons and yeah his is OCC... but I would say 95% of Snapes on this website are OCC.
Author's Response: Yeah he's in a tight spot!
Author's Response: Read the next chapter. Not is all as it seems... Hhehehe! I'm truly evil. :)
Author's Response: Thank ye!
What will the Slytherins say? Hes got his real face on. Will anybody reconise him? I actually thought the potion would 'burn' thru(sp) the glamour, leaving a patch on his cheek that shows his real face & the rest being his 'other' face. & What would Snape & Dumbeldore need to talk about? Does Snape know what happened? Lots to think about, keep updating, E Author's Response: Interesting theory and the 'glamour' face. I hadn't thought of it. One - it isn't a glamour per se. :) Harry has two faces... two identities... which exisit simulantaneously but one is not hidden over the other.
Author's Response: Thank ye
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-Elise Author's Response: Harry just excels at being Harry. Harry is annoyed somewhat at Dumbles... and he is a Gryff it just seemed natural for him to defend a 'weaker' opponent. :)
You should go back and edit it though. There are a lot of mistakes, which make it difficult to read sometimes. Author's Response: Yeah, I know about the mistakes. I'll get round to it. I did have a beta.... but I'm still waiting for an email back. I have difficulties beta-ing my own work because I just glide over the mistakes and read what should be there and yet I'm able to pick apart someone else's writing.... dear me...
BTW, I've updated both my fics, GP and Heir, if you're interested. Author's Response: All I can say is next chapter. I will get round to reading GP again, when I have time. I sometimes go off reading for a little while. I know I'm strange. |
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