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Reviews For Identity Crisis
nice one...i cannot believe that Blaise is related to Harry...i wonder what Draco will say when he finds out...and Snape! oh man...please update soon!
Author's Response: That's why I've made Blaise related to Harry... it was unexpected. :)
Author's Response: Thankyou, yes unfortuantely if you scroll down and the author has put nothing more up.... nothing comes up. :) More soon.:)
Author's Response: Thank you. Don't worry there's more mystery to come.
Author's Response: Snape is a little slow... so I'll encourage you to keep reading. They will find out more about there mother when Severus Snape decides he is ready....
Author's Response: Thank you. I've always been obessed with twins and hidden identities.
You do need a beta, though. Also: Watch characterization. A teenaged boy doesn't say stuff like: 'isn't that romantic'...they are embarrassed by such notions. And Blaise is a Slytherin, as is Snape. Would they tell Draco, Nott or Goyle about this? Not hardly. They are secretive and sneaky, remember? No profit in telling, and some danger. Cyrus is an okay name, but I agree with the other reviewer that thought 'Saige' was pretty bad. Author's Response: Yes, Well unfortuantely I haven't heard from my beta in weeks... not one word and I'm impatient waiting for a response. As for Blaise's notions: he is curious and drawn in by the mystery. He wants to know. Perhaps he didn't mean to say that aloud. And you are making assumptions on the Draco, Nott and Goyle on how they know. Perhaps there was some profit in telling... But I need these Slytherins as plot devices. They need to be there. (Considering I have some plans for them). And realistically they are 12 - what kind of 12 year old doesn't have a group of friends that they are especially fond of? Saige is an inside joke in my household. Snape having a kid with a potions type name. It's called my dry humour. Hehehe! It was better than cauldron, or asphodel.... *snickers* Actually Saige should fit right alongside other names such as, Severus, Albus, Hermoine, Draco, Scorpius etc.. *laughs*
... ... yes, still breathing. MORE!!!! OR I SHALL HOLD MY BREATH TILL I PASS OUT!!! (okay so maybe that's not the best of threats... but you know what I mean). Author's Response: Still breathing? --- More soon I promise - it is written Thank you
Author's Response: That will be a while. Harry seems to be able to remain elusive for a little while yet. :) |
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