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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Title: Stranded 03 Apr 2008 9:34 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank ye cleestialuna
Title: Stranded 02 Apr 2008 12:06 am
Reviewer: Neinka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hmm interesting! I hope it will be more :)

    Author's Response: There is more. Between you and me (and all the other people who actually read author replies) I am currently in the middle of chapter 7. cheers
Title: Stranded 01 Apr 2008 9:53 am
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    That part with Harry and Dumbledore, was that at the end of first year? Or was it as soon as they got to Hogwarts? Great chapter, keep up the good work, and update soon!

    Author's Response: No at the start of second year. Updates will be up in a week or so. Cheers
Title: Stranded 01 Apr 2008 4:58 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    A Harry who is not a reckless dimwit... oh my!

    Perhaps that alone will make a big difference in the relations between Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Perhaps... I just hate in when Harry is a 'reckless dimwit' (I might borrow that phrase sometime!)

     More soon.

Title: Stranded 01 Apr 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well that was a different twist on the whole second year car incident. It was refreshing to see them acting smart for once, maybe not as much fun, but well, even Sev says they made a good decision. Blast Dumbledore, what is he hiding? Poor Harry!

    Update soon and you're doing a great job!

    I've posted here also, so if you'd like R&R me, thanks! :)

    Author's Response:

    I hate reading stupid!Harry... and I most certainly can't make myself write him. Harry will most likely make some dumb choices- but he's a kid. I know your name so I may have read your fictions before. I'll have a looksie later.

    I used to review everything that I read... but in the last year and a half I stopped doing that.

    Give me about a week to have more up. :0)

     

Title: Stranded 31 Mar 2008 7:14 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus' reaction here was interesting. It makes me wonder if he knows about Harry. It certainly will help that your Harry showed more sense than Rowling's. ;-) The scenes in this chapter felt rushed for some reason. I don't mind jumping from scene to scene, but the writing felt as if you just wanted to get these scenes done.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review... some of these scenes weren't supposed to have been in there - such as the chat with the sorting hat and Dumbledore. Spur of the moment decision. And I really do want to get to chapter ten or eleven where things start getting very messy for our characters. Chapter two was not my favourite chapter to write - it really felt like a filler.

    And Rowlings' Harry always annoyed me with his inability to think at times... I would cringe at times he was that stupid! I don't think I can do stupid!Harry.

Title: Stranded 31 Mar 2008 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Morgana_White (Signed) [Report This]
    Really good chapter. I must admit I like your story more and more. Can't wait to see what happens next! Please, update soon! I'm just dying of curiosity!

    Author's Response: Chapter Three needs some editting still. Won't be long. Give me about a week. Really busy at work. Thanks for the review. More soon promise. :)
Title: I'm Curious... Just Curious 31 Mar 2008 5:03 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Really, interesting so far.

    You have a great start here and I can't wait for you to post more.

    Author's Response: I have another chapter in validation at the moment... I hope. So should be up soon. :)
Title: I'm Curious... Just Curious 31 Mar 2008 4:16 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good start.

    Author's Response:

    Thank ye!

Title: I'm Curious... Just Curious 26 Mar 2008 4:50 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    nice! an adoption story without a convenient note that was sent with some sort of delay spell.... and good reason for harry's physical features! can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Well I couldn't very well just do same old, same old. This story will have plently of strange twists I'm sure. :)

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