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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Title: Meeting Cyrus 03 Jun 2008 8:23 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, so Harry has a twin!! I like where this is going!! I especially like that it's Blaise. Not many people pick him to be Harry's twin, but he does fit, and it works rather well. The opening of the chapter was a little confusing, I thought that maybe Harry had wished himself into another universe or something. Other than that, just the usual typos probably. Assent means agreement, ascent means to go up.

    Good chapter and thanks for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I've given up my beta for lost in cyber world somewhere. I haven't heard from her in weeks? maybe. And I really don't edit my own work well. I might pay my sister to edit for me!!! Thank you  for the review.:)

Title: Meeting Cyrus 03 Jun 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: graenr (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this is the chapter that makes the story for me. I was beginning to feel as frustrated as Harry with all the strings and hints being thrown out and feeling very little motion towards plot development, but now! Characters interacting meaningfully, a twin, details about the mother and Snape's acknowledgment of fatherhood in anyway. Now I am definitely hooked.

    Author's Response: Stay hooked there is more mystery and characters to be added into the mix! Thanks :)
Title: I Wish I Might 03 Jun 2008 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    About beta-ing: I have that problem too sometimes, when I don't see my mistakes. The trick is to wait some time, like a day or two before you go back to the text and look for errors. You'll have enough distance from it to see more errors. This only increases with time, so if you post a chapter, and come back a week, month, or year later, they will show up.

    Author's Response: Yeah, this chapter was written three weaks ago... cringes... I've read them so many times that I'm bored and I know what it should say... so my silly brain sees the correct spelling etc. Stupid...  know.
Title: Meeting Cyrus 03 Jun 2008 3:50 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fun twist--but the names are just horrible! I really can't see Harry as a "Saige" but I'll live with it. ;-) Blaise is an interesting choice for twin brother. He is being a little bit slow, isn't he? But this will let him actually get to know things about Harry without having to be told.

    Author's Response:

    Read the review response of Deco - it explains why Saige... it is a joke - hehehehe! - Snape having a kid with potions name... better than Cauldron! Snape and Blaise need to be slow... lets say there inner emotions inside them make em a little blind.

    Cyrus was chosen for the meaning and for the historical figure. Means sun and throne. Cyrus is an ancient name of a great Persian (?) King - known for power and prowess. And I needed names that haven't been used before....

Title: Meeting Cyrus 03 Jun 2008 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story and the whole twin thing just makes it more juicy. How long will it be before Blaise figures out who his twin is?

    Author's Response: Um.. maybe three to four chapters depending if I stay on plan. Thank you:)
Title: Meeting Cyrus 03 Jun 2008 12:45 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a fascinating chapter - I was just checking it out and immediately got drawn in. I guess I'd better go back and read the beginning now *sheepish grin*

    Author's Response: Thank you very much glad you had enjoyed.
Title: Meeting Cyrus 03 Jun 2008 9:25 am
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was unexpected!!! Blaise?!! Twin? Snape? (Okay so i kind of saw that one coming). Poor Harry or should i say *Saige*, Snape must know about Harry it would be sad if he's not telling him because he still hates him.
    Please please please update soon, can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Keep reading Cecilia. If you want answers on Snape - re read the conversation between Cryus and himself... there are a few cues on how Snape feels there.
Title: I Wish I Might 31 May 2008 7:27 am
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    uh oh

    Author's Response: you can say that again!!
Title: I Wish I Might 27 May 2008 8:49 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    hmmmm. this is very interesting i wonder what harry will do now

    Author's Response: You'ld just have to wait and find out...
Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    ...er...normal face? What does that mean?

    ARGH! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! lol, great chapter, keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Sorry about the delay... I had to go back and check my writing. And I couldn't find the phrase normal face... Just know I needed a word to differentate the 'identities of Harry. I think in the area you may have been looking at Harry sees his original face, ie the one he was born with, biologoically speaking as his normal face even though he's been living with Harry's face for all his life.


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