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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Great update and I am looking forward to more!! I really , really like your Harry. Not because of his wandless transfiguration -- although that is cool too -- but because of his inner monologue, it's so very 12 year old boy -- playful, creative and authentic. Author's Response: Or the inner monologue... could be the author's strange, twisted sense of humour. :) Glad you like. :)
Author's Response: I've updated.... I hope you continue to read and enjoy. :)
You need to add 'is' in there for this sentence to make sense, making it "Sometimes all a pain riddled Gryffindor cub needs, is to leave his wounds to someone else." and i'm not sure that it sounds right to say that they were locked in a physiological duel unless they were doing something other that arguing, perhaps you meant psychological duel? Author's Response: Yah... oops... I got a little bored waiting for my beta.... and just updated I've checked the next chapter a little better.
Author's Response: Interesting stories always have interactions interactions.... you therefore should enjoy the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hmmm.... I don't think his 'face' will let him hide for much longer...:) Although not being Harry Potter, comes with certain advantages... like loosing Lockhart (I just can't stand the man - and he's fictional!)
Author's Response: Read next chpater is all I can comment. Snape has his reasons and yeah his is OCC... but I would say 95% of Snapes on this website are OCC.
Author's Response: Yeah he's in a tight spot!
Author's Response: Read the next chapter. Not is all as it seems... Hhehehe! I'm truly evil. :)
Author's Response: Thank ye!
What will the Slytherins say? Hes got his real face on. Will anybody reconise him? I actually thought the potion would 'burn' thru(sp) the glamour, leaving a patch on his cheek that shows his real face & the rest being his 'other' face. & What would Snape & Dumbeldore need to talk about? Does Snape know what happened? Lots to think about, keep updating, E Author's Response: Interesting theory and the 'glamour' face. I hadn't thought of it. One - it isn't a glamour per se. :) Harry has two faces... two identities... which exisit simulantaneously but one is not hidden over the other.
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