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Reviews For Identity Crisis
Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 8:20 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dun!
    Great update and I am looking forward to more!! I really , really like your Harry. Not because of his wandless transfiguration -- although that is cool too -- but because of his inner monologue, it's so very 12 year old boy -- playful, creative and authentic.

    Author's Response:

    Or the inner monologue... could be the author's strange, twisted sense of humour. :) Glad you like. :)

Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 4:24 pm
Reviewer: Akili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant, especially that last sentence. I do hope you update fast, after such a cliffhanger.

    Author's Response: I've updated.... I hope you continue to read and enjoy. :)
Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    “Sometimes all a pain riddled Gryffindor cub needs to leave his wounds to someone else,”
    You need to add 'is' in there for this sentence to make sense, making it "Sometimes all a pain riddled Gryffindor cub needs, is to leave his wounds to someone else."
    and i'm not sure that it sounds right to say that they were locked in a physiological duel unless they were doing something other that arguing, perhaps you meant psychological duel?

    Author's Response:

    Yah... oops...

     I got a little bored waiting for my beta.... and just updated

    I've checked the next chapter a little better.

Title: I Wish I Might 26 May 2008 2:58 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lots of interesting interactions going on here--Harry and Ron, Harry and Snape, Snape and Dumbledore, etc. I'm intrigued by what you are doing with the Slytherins--having Blaise get the headmaster and then having the Slytherins catch Harry changing his face.

    Author's Response: Interesting stories always have interactions interactions.... you therefore should enjoy the next chapter. 
Title: I Wish I Might 25 May 2008 10:03 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    [The below was rhetorical by the way *grins*] Poor Harry, i hope Snape and Dumbles admit the truth to him soon. At least his new found ability would allow him to run away completely if things ever got too much for him but still be in plain sight and safe.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm.... I don't think his 'face' will let him hide for much longer...:) Although not being Harry Potter, comes with certain advantages... like loosing Lockhart (I just can't stand the man - and he's fictional!)

Title: I Wish I Might 25 May 2008 9:56 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh who's in the mirror? Will Dumbles and Snape figure out Harry's secret. Why are they lying so blantantly to him, he found the bloody receipt and knows the name of the company, why wouldn't Dumbles and Snape admit it, unless there was another plot afoot, or Snape really doesn't know... His reaction was a bit extreme though. Lol. Anyway you devil you! you can't leave us all saliavating for more like this. Lol :) Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Read next chpater is all I can comment. Snape has his reasons and yeah his is OCC... but I would say 95% of Snapes on this website are OCC.
Title: I Wish I Might 25 May 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dun.... What's Harry going to say now? Great chapter and I really hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Yeah he's in a tight spot!
Title: I Wish I Might 25 May 2008 7:00 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool! I love it! Harry's just GOTTA have some fun with this! Unfortunate that the Slytherins caught him but oh the things you could do with this ability! Snape was great, too. I liked his professionalism in front of Dumbledore's interrogations. And, come to think of it, it's about time Dumbledore DID interrogate Snape for the things that go on between him and his students.

    Author's Response: Read the next chapter. Not is all as it seems... Hhehehe! I'm truly evil. :)
Title: I Wish I Might 25 May 2008 12:04 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    great to see another chapter hope there's more soon!

    Author's Response: Thank ye!
Title: I Wish I Might 25 May 2008 10:22 am
Reviewer: Eternity (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hhhhhhmmmmmm!

    What will the Slytherins say?
    Hes got his real face on. Will anybody reconise him?

    I actually thought the potion would 'burn' thru(sp) the glamour, leaving a patch on his cheek that shows his real face & the rest being his 'other' face.
    &
    What would Snape & Dumbeldore need to talk about? Does Snape know what happened?

    Lots to think about,
    keep updating,
    E

    Author's Response:

    Interesting theory and the 'glamour' face. I hadn't thought of it. One - it isn't a glamour per se. :)  Harry has two faces... two identities... which exisit simulantaneously but one is not hidden over the other.

     

     


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