| Title: In Safe Hands
| 01 Feb 2018 10:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter
Poor little Harry! Those Dursleys are just awful - completely and utterly awful! D: How anyone could be so dreadful to a child is beyond me. I suppose it always will be.
I like the way you picture the adults
Poor Harry, this is rather sad.
-P.G.
Another great chapter! I loved how you've managed to show how Harry suffered by his reactions to Remus' kindness. Poor little thing.
I'm glad that Remus and Severus at least have realised that Sirius is innocent. I only hope something can be done about that now, too, and of course that they can find a way to keep Harry safe.
I just loved Remus taking care of Harry, with the bath and feeding him and playing with him.
| Title: In Safe Hands
| 24 Mar 2008 11:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Another good chapter, and Harry's POV has real wit; I particularly liked the "Books-Everywhere-Room". Good scene where Lupin & Snape realize about Peter and Dumbledore's machinations.
But: "Oh boy, you could really use a haircut, darling." I mean, no. 'Darling' and 'sweetie sound stupid coming from a man...'moppet' is okay.
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