very very VERY well done, that. Absolutely love it; though in my mushy mushy heart Sev would have just run with Harry as soon as he saw him, but then I just hate to see Sev left out ^^
Very nicely written though, I love your Lupin ^^
| Title: Crapilogue
| 07 Aug 2009 6:59 am
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| Reviewer: Mariya (Anonymous)
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Aww...this was very sweet. I knew there was a good reason why Snape is my favorite character.
| Title: Crapilogue
| 25 Jun 2009 8:35 am
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| Reviewer: dragongirlg (Anonymous)
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Wow! I love this story! Your three-year-old Harry, and the effects of the abuse on him, are really well-described and perfectly characterized. I'm very, very impressed and the minimalist writing/tone is also perfect.
This is so brilliantly written! When I saw it was only 4 chapters long, I just thought "it's either not finished or has a really bad, rushed ending" but to make it any longer would ruin it. I love this story and when Lupin is getting more and more upset over Harry it just breaks my heart! I'm off to find other stories by you ^_^
Did snape get him out legally or illegally?
You brought up some really good points. I'll bet Severus didn't do to bad with old Dumpy pants. Probably held a *leak* out to the news papers over his head;D
Fantastic work my dear!
That was sadly a bit disappointing--I wish you had went into more detail about what happened between Albus and Severus and what happened to Harry after that. Don't get me wrong, I really like your story idea and I thought the first two chapters from Harry's point of view were great and really cute, but it seems like you rushed to finish it and I think the ending would be much better if it was expanded on.
-P.G.
Does Sev know he's Harry's father?
Poor Harry, this is rather sad.
-P.G.
Oh, I really like this so far! How old is Harry supposed to be in this?
-P.G.
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