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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: A Sorting and An Apology 22 Feb 2010 8:16 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I was hoping Harry would get to be resorted as well, Ah well

    Author's Response: Yeah well we can't have everything.
Title: A Sorting and An Apology 14 Jul 2009 6:25 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome description for a plainly awesome witch. Does our Harry have a crush now? The apology seemed real enough. But actions speak louder then words. Oy, Sybill, wake up! Great first chapter to a story.

    Author's Response:

    Oh you better believe he does! And Aria will continue to surprise you, she's got very unusual talents.  They do indeed, as Sev knows well.  Yeah Sybill, go take a nap somewhere else! LOL!

    By the way I've updated RPM, so you can see some more of HG/DM and Sev "talks" to Draco and evil Pansy!

Title: A Sorting and An Apology 30 Dec 2008 8:06 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the apology, though I'm with Sev on how he feels about it, wanting to wait and see if it's sincere and all. Even with the Order of Merlin thing, I think Sev should still doubt him until he proves himself.

    Is Trelawney about to come up with a new prophecy?

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Severus will never trust Dumbledore the way he used to again, not after what the old wizard did to him and to harry--no matter what altruistic motives he might have had.  And rightly so.  Dumbledore has the tendency to play God and treat people like pawns 'for the greater good' and Severus will never forgive him for doing so.

    No Trelawney has no new predictions, she just fainted from shock.

Title: A Sorting and An Apology 14 Jul 2008 5:30 am
Reviewer: supergirl_3684 (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe! she fainted! that was a graet begining!

    Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you liked it!
Title: A Sorting and An Apology 11 May 2008 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Persephone Chiara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Already lovin' it! Woooooo!^^

    Author's Response: Thanks and hopefully you'll like the rest too!
Title: A Sorting and An Apology 04 Apr 2008 12:22 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story! It's just as good as your other one!

    Author's Response: Thanks for saying so!
Title: A Sorting and An Apology 31 Mar 2008 12:27 pm
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...it was good and I liked the speed with which you posted the sequel! Yay for you!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you liked the first chapter!
Title: A Sorting and An Apology 31 Mar 2008 3:38 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow. that was amazing! bout time things were set right! and Remus' neice putting Draco in his place...that was a long time comming!

    Author's Response: Yes, and just wait, because Draco vs. Harry and Aria ain't over yet.  There'll be more to come!
Title: A Sorting and An Apology 28 Mar 2008 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    When I read the summary at the top, I thought that you might be bringing Neil over to join Harry. Wouldn't that be fun for the both of them.

    Author's Response: Yes, and I did think of it, but actually, it'd be too complicated, since Neil has a perfectly good teacher in NJ and wouldn't want to move and leave his family.
Title: A Sorting and An Apology 28 Mar 2008 4:20 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you've got a good start here! I'm absolute pants at fanfic terminology, and I still can't grasp the concept of a MarySue, but I wouldn't worry about it too much. You're right: good looks are external. And the fact that Trelawney fainted makes me believe that something...sketchy...is going on there.

    And let's face it, Harry's thirteen and is obviously going to be taken by a pretty girl. He jumped all over Cho, and she was supposedly the prettiest girl in Hogwarts..or one of them, at least.

    I am anxious to see where you take this. I loved the line: "Better start running, Neville, ‘cause something tells me that little creep's gonna be on your arse every minute, just like the professor..." That made me smile. Those darn students and their Snape chatter. *shakes head*

    Good job, and keep writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I think people are misinterpreting Aria here, because of first impressions.  She's the new girl and yes, she is pretty, but she's NOT a model or anything close to it, or a fashion plate either, she does have a beautiful smile, but there's a lot more to her than that.  She's had as rough a life as Harry and indeed has some of the same problems he did, though she hides it better, you'll see that in a future chapter.  She also has some unusual abilities, which she reveals as she chooses only to certain people.  As for Trelawney . . .she was caught off guard by Dumbledore's announcement--ha! I believe a Mary Sue is one of those perfect little drone girls who simply exist for a main character to fall in love with and Aria definitely is not one, I don't write them and she's got plenty of personality, wait and see!

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