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Reviews For Hide Yourself From A Prisoner
Author's Response: Yeah well we can't have everything.
Author's Response: Oh you better believe he does! And Aria will continue to surprise you, she's got very unusual talents. They do indeed, as Sev knows well. Yeah Sybill, go take a nap somewhere else! LOL! By the way I've updated RPM, so you can see some more of HG/DM and Sev "talks" to Draco and evil Pansy!
Is Trelawney about to come up with a new prophecy? -P.G. Author's Response: Severus will never trust Dumbledore the way he used to again, not after what the old wizard did to him and to harry--no matter what altruistic motives he might have had. And rightly so. Dumbledore has the tendency to play God and treat people like pawns 'for the greater good' and Severus will never forgive him for doing so. No Trelawney has no new predictions, she just fainted from shock.
Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks and hopefully you'll like the rest too!
Author's Response: Thanks for saying so!
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you liked the first chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, and just wait, because Draco vs. Harry and Aria ain't over yet. There'll be more to come!
Author's Response: Yes, and I did think of it, but actually, it'd be too complicated, since Neil has a perfectly good teacher in NJ and wouldn't want to move and leave his family.
And let's face it, Harry's thirteen and is obviously going to be taken by a pretty girl. He jumped all over Cho, and she was supposedly the prettiest girl in Hogwarts..or one of them, at least. I am anxious to see where you take this. I loved the line: "Better start running, Neville, ‘cause something tells me that little creep's gonna be on your arse every minute, just like the professor..." That made me smile. Those darn students and their Snape chatter. *shakes head* Good job, and keep writing! Author's Response: Thanks so much and I think people are misinterpreting Aria here, because of first impressions. She's the new girl and yes, she is pretty, but she's NOT a model or anything close to it, or a fashion plate either, she does have a beautiful smile, but there's a lot more to her than that. She's had as rough a life as Harry and indeed has some of the same problems he did, though she hides it better, you'll see that in a future chapter. She also has some unusual abilities, which she reveals as she chooses only to certain people. As for Trelawney . . .she was caught off guard by Dumbledore's announcement--ha! I believe a Mary Sue is one of those perfect little drone girls who simply exist for a main character to fall in love with and Aria definitely is not one, I don't write them and she's got plenty of personality, wait and see! |
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