| Title: Midnight Intruder
| 12 May 2008 7:14 am
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| Reviewer: Persephone Chiara (Anonymous)
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UH OH!!! While I can't wait for the Sirius/Severus confrontation...I'm also dreading it. Much as I love them both, they have FIERCE tempers!^^
Author's Response: Yes, they do but . . . well, I won't ruin the surprise.
what a great chapter severus wa very patient with dealing with harry after he hurt draco, sirius black in the dormitries and rosie going to hunt him down, go rosie and i hope you track him down, here have a doggy biscuit when you get back for doing a good job
Author's Response: Yes, well you'll see what happens with Rosie soon, I'll be posting shortly! Thanks again for your awesome review!
Woohoo, another great chapter! Poor Neville. Lol.
*waits for next chapter*
Author's Response: Thanks and I should have one up by tonight!
sigh harry is in trouble and poor old neville
love how sev comforts and cares for the boy after the punishment is done - with is hands and his back and all of that
wait till he finds out about black being in the tower he is gonna have a bird!!!
Author's Response: I know, those two are like trouble magnets. And yes, once the punishment is over, Sev will forgive, though mayb enot forget! And you're right about Severus having a canary once he finds out!
Go Rosie! I hope she'll help them track Sirius down. Good chapter and I hope you'll be able to update again soon!
Author's Response: She'll try, she lives to hunt, like any beagle!
| Title: Midnight Intruder
| 05 Apr 2008 2:27 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Absolutely loved it! Severus's punishment was fair and even made me laugh at one point. His massage after Harry's detention was a nice touch and reassured his son that he still loved him. And Rosie and the business with Sirius was wonderfully entertaining. Love the plot twists!
Author's Response: Happy to hear it and please keep reading!
| Title: Midnight Intruder
| 05 Apr 2008 1:47 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Great Chapter! I agree totally with Severus's punishment, it was fair and harry should get the message now! Rosie steals the show though!
Author's Response: yes she does and thanks for your review!
Wow, well at least Severus didn't scar Harry for life, I agree with the punishment completely. The comment about the chart for feeding Rosie was priceless, it's totally something Sev would do. It was really sweet that Sev noticed that Harry was stiff and offered him the massage after his punishment. It'll be intresting to see if Rosie is able to find Sirius. Very curious to see what's going to happen next and whose causing the ruckus in Slytherin. Keep up the awesome work, I'm really loving this story. Please update again soon. LES
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. I like to have Severus giving out normal kinds of punishments the way most parents would give their children. The chart was inspired by my sister, who threatened the same thing to her teenagers when they got a puppy and weren't taking care of it. They shaped up really quick! And you'll find out what's going on in Slytherin soon!
damn that prat! i hope they all find out that sirius was just looking for the blasted rat! percy is not as innocent as he seems huh!? love the way this story is going!
Author's Response: Thanks again, and just wait till you see what was going on in the Slytherin dorm while Sirius was creeping around GT!
damn that prat! i hope they all find out that sirius was just looking for the blasted rat! percy is not as innocent as he seems huh!? love the way this story is going!
Author's Response: Thanks and yes, percy is not the innocent goody-two-shoes he seems, haha!
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