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Title: Patronus Rising 17 Jul 2009 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Mmmf. Kawaii on Harry's Patronus btw. Loved the chapter, and Moony's reaction was just like any worried parent's.

    Author's Response: It was, poor Moony.  But you can;t blame him, Aria's all he's got. 
Title: Patronus Rising 12 May 2008 5:05 pm
Reviewer: Persephone Chiara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter! So, Harry's Patronus is a beagle? Didn't see that coming!^^

    Author's Response: Yes, I decided to make it different from the books and a beagle is a very happy dog.  I know because I have one!
Title: Patronus Rising 15 Apr 2008 7:56 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, i'm glad harry is alright after the quidditch match, though remus was abit scary after it but glad he's teaching them to conjure protronuses

    Author's Response: yes, Remus went a little off the wall when Aria nearly got killed, he's not used to seeing a relative in danger and the were nature was roused as well, making him more prone to violence.  And Harry will be fine, unles she goes and does something stupid, like try and fight dragons.  The patronus lessons will pay off later on in the story.
Title: Patronus Rising 11 Apr 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Really glad nobody was really hurt, and that Ron and Hermione decided to make up with Harry. Let the father and son arguments commence. LOL. Keep up the great work. LES

    Author's Response: Thanks and I shall, I love writing scenes when Harry and Sev argue, they're such fun!
Title: Patronus Rising 10 Apr 2008 11:56 pm
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    wow

    near death indeed

    I did not like that remus called aria stupid and insane but I can understand that he might only have said that out of complete fear- which is also what caused the bruises

    so the sneezing powder came from draco so the hexes must be from pettigrew.....

    love how the two dads each mange to tell their kids how much they love them but will not hesitate to discipline no matter what might be going on

    well done

    wow

    Author's Response:  Yes, Remus was terrified and saying things which he did not mean, he went a bit off the wall.  He's not used to seeing his kid in danger and it totally freaked him out!  As for the broom . . .I'm not saying just yet! And yes, both Sev and Remus know th eimportance of discipline, as teachers and parents.
Title: Patronus Rising 10 Apr 2008 6:45 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I am really glad to see that Draco didn't catch the snitch. He would have been absolutly unbearable if Slytherin won. Great chapter! :)

    Author's Response: You're absolutely right, since he was always unbearable to start with!
Title: Patronus Rising 10 Apr 2008 4:08 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    nice job on this one!

    love the wandless magic!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to have Aria do something a bit different, since she is, after all an American witch.
Title: Patronus Rising 10 Apr 2008 3:29 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww! I loved Remus's reaction and the way Sev threatened to tie Harry to the bed! LOL! And I'm happy the kids made up at last and can't wait for the next chapter! Well done!

    Author's Response: Yeah, I don't like it when best friends fight! And Sev's threat is so typical of an exasperated parent, dontcha think?
Title: Patronus Rising 10 Apr 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I loved every bit of it! I like how you're developing the relationship between Remus and Aria and Harry and Severus, it's very realisitic! I'm off to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much, I really appreciate your reviews!

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