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| 17 Jul 2009 6:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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He should strip the hide from the creep and hang it up to dry. *bounces about* You had to leave it on a cliffie again, didn't you :P?
Author's Response: Always. But that just leaves you wanting more. Yeah now that would work.
| Title: Permission Denied
| 12 May 2008 5:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Persephone Chiara (Anonymous)
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Oh my....dramatic stuff! Poor Mia! I hope Sev will make that bastard see reason! And poor Melody!
Author's Response: Don't worry, he will, trust me!
sev is going to handle the barry problem once and for all - I can sense it
I do see trouble afoot for harry
sev should know that harry cannot resist a lot of temptation- can remus take the kids to hogsmeade for a short time- can remus over rule sev's decision
we'll see
Author's Response: Yes he is and if Remus weren't too busy he would take Harry to Hogsmeade, but . . .
great chapter, not much happened, harry should be mpre understanding about why he can't visit hogsmeade but i do understand why harry is in a mood and severus should do some good charms on devon rather than beating him up
Author's Response: Yes, but remember Harry's thirteen and it's difficult for kids that age to forego things they really want, even if it's for a good reason. As for Devon, you'll see what Sev does to him!
I so love overprotective, overbearing Severus especially when it comes to Harry. I was very suprised to see Remus get as angry as he did at Aria, but if you're that upset about something you don't realize it until after it happens. Can't wait to see what happens to Devon.
Author's Response: Me too and you're exactly right about Remus, the poor wolf didn't know how to handle a near-death experience and he just snapped.
Wow! Great Sequil... I just finished 15 chapters.. well inbetween my 2 1/2 jobs... Just what I needed! Thank you for making my week!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you too for leaving such a wonderful review! I'm glad you're enjoying this one!
| Title: Permission Denied
| 10 Apr 2008 11:20 am
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| Reviewer: Silent_Soliloquy (kirei_tara) (Anonymous)
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*chuckles* I thought the exact same thing was going to happen. I say give the Devon the Diaper-head (I wanted to say something extremely profane, but I didn't :P)an impotence potion or charm for an undeserved length of time and blackmail him to leave Mia out of it....or he will be impotent for the rest of his life. *grins* Of course a little "roughing" Devon up wouldn't be to bad either. Hm, maybe Sev could threaten to use his privates as potions ingredients? Harry is not the only one with an evil mind as you can see. :D Great chapter by the way, and I just know for a fact Harry's going to get caught. *shakes head* Will the boy never learn? Severus reminds me of how my Mom was in many ways, and you just didn't cross the lady. :D
"Dad's gone! Yessssssssssssssssss! Hogsmeade here I commmmmmmeeeeee!"
Author's Response: That's for darn sure, as Harry will learn, to his sorrow. But what can you expect, he's 13 and we were all stupid at that age--God knows I was--and think we can outsmart our father or mother. Riight. They've got experience and they know just how our little minds work!
Hmm I have a feeling Harry will use this opportunity to sneak out since Severus is gone. I hope Sev hexes Devon big time too! :)
Author's Response: And you'd be right, since this is Harry we're talking about and he acts first and worries about consequences later. As for Devon . . .he'll get his don't worry!
is that a real question?
at this point i would just let sev do what ever he wants!
Author's Response: Well, I would like to see what people come up with! LOL!
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| 10 Apr 2008 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Oh man, is Devon in for it now! Kick his ass Sev! Loved the pouting Harry, it's so typical of a bratty 13 year old, as I should know--I've got one!
Author's Response: Yes, he is and I'm glad you like my portrayal of Harry, I have several teenage nephews so a lot of his behavior is based upon them!
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