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Title: Permission Denied 10 Apr 2008 3:25 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooo! Now I can't wait to see what happens next. I think Severus should turn Devon into something nasty, like a spider and step on him!

    Author's Response: Nice suggestion! Thanks!
Title: Permission Denied 10 Apr 2008 3:23 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *squeel* I can't wait for the next chapter! I have to know what Sev does to Devon. I think he should castrate him. Or use one or more of Harry's suggestions.

    Also, is Harry going to try to sneak into hogsmead since his dad's gone? That would be something Harry would do. And I would love to see Sev's reaction to that.

    Please update soon. I can't wait till the next chapter. Be creative with Devon!

    Author's Response: I agree! As for what harry does when Sev's gone . . .well, you know the old saying, when the cat's away, the mice will play? You'll see what happens to Devon tomorrow, I'll post it as soon as I'm done with it, like maybe tomorrow morning!
Title: Permission Denied 10 Apr 2008 2:11 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I appreciate how you've made Harry as defiant as he ought to be. I think at thirteen, he probably doesn't realize how bratty he's acting. Even older adolescents don't realize it all of the time.

    Also, I'm surprised at how fast you're cranking out these chapters...lol. Do you have this written already, or are you writing it as you go? If it's the latter, then I just have to say...wow...you are very kind to your faithful readers ;)

    Are you going to have any scenes with Sirius in this story? That would be interesting...

    Anyway, keep writing!

    Author's Response: No, it's not done yet, I'm working on it as fast as I can.  it's a bit easier for me to write this one since I can use a lot of the background JKR provided and don't have to reinvent the wheel, so to speak.  Yes, Sirius will be in the story, but not till the end as was true in the original, I'm sticking pretty close to the event sin the book, though there will be a few surprises of my own! Thanks for reviewing, as always!

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