| Title: Family Matters
| 17 Jul 2009 7:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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I was expecting that Harry would be disobedient. I mean, he has all the equipment for it, so it's just a simple matter to use them. I think the punishment should have been harsher. I could come up with some very creative ideas for bastards like Devon. I'm like Harry in that respect :).
Author's Response: Sev didn;t want to go to jail and the important thing was he got rid of Devon and now Mel can raise Mia in peace. yes, that's our Harry, trouble's shadow.
| Title: Family Matters
| 12 May 2008 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Persephone Chiara (Anonymous)
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Oh yeah, that was brill!^^ I can't abide men who abuse women in any way and men who hit children are even worse. Loved how Sev defended Mel. Ah, I wish I had him for a cousin. (But then I'd be in trouble for lusting after a family member, so maybe not *GGG*) Great chapter!
Author's Response: So do I and that's why I had Sev do all those things to him, which we can't do to people like that in the real world. And I wish I was married to Severus--don't you?
Oh sev was brilliant with devon
and with mia and mel too
he can be my big brother anytime
why do I suspect mr harry has gone off to hogsmeade LOL
uh oh
Author's Response: Mine too! And your suspiscions are right on the money!
good chapter, severus was fairly calm while dealing with devon, i would of done worse things
Author's Response: So would I, honestly, but Severus is controlled and he doesn't want to get arrested by the Ministry.
| Title: Family Matters
| 11 Apr 2008 6:42 am
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| Reviewer: Silent_Soliloquy (Anonymous)
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*snickers@what happened to Devon the rodent* Nice! I saw I got pretty close to what I was hoping for, but the mouse was a nice added torture. (You have an evil mind, too!) I was jokingly chiding about Harry before, but seriously.. yes it will be quite awhile before he works it out thoroughly. I loved your chapter and I think Devon did get what he deserved. I am curious as how Harry with try to explain this and see if he thinks he can get out it somewhat. Often we ponder at one time if our parents had special powers to know certain things when we are young but it is...
A. Experience from when they are children.
B. They learn our habits and nuances. *grimaces*
C.Though children are highly intelligent....most still lack certain adult logic.
Author's Response: Exactly so and Harry will try and explain just what he was doing at hogsmeade, not that it'll work, but being a kid he'll try, as you'll see in two chapters. I'm glad you agree with what Sev did to Devon! I do love torturing my bad guys!
oh yeah! go sev...humiliation and violance...totally fitting...
as usual totaly awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks, hon, and just wait till you see Harry's Hogmeade visit, there's more humiliation in store for a certain nasty child . . .guess who?
Wonderful! I am sooo glad he taught Devon a lesson! I hope Sev isn't too harsh on Harry now...
Author's Response: Uh, well you know Sev . . .
*squeel* Sev is awesome! I loved it! It was well worth the wait. There are no words to describe my utter near orgasmic joy as Sev beat the shit out of him and shrunk his family jewels. It was wonderful.
I can't wait to find out what Harry did.
Amazing chapter. It was everything I hoped for and more!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! I had a very good time writing it--I love to give the nasty characters the fate they deserve *chuckles malevolently!*
oh boy! next chapter is going to be good...
Author's Response: Yes, Harry goes where no young Snape has gone before . . .without permission, that is.
Loved to see Devon get his arse kicked the jerkwad totally deserved it. Severus is not someone to cross wizard or not. Poor Harry is going to get himself incarcerated for life, going to love to see his reaction to what Moony has to say. Keep up the awesome work and please update again soon. LES
Author's Response: Got that right!! No you don't cross Severus--least not if you want to keep breathing . . .and especially don't hurt his family. Thanks for all your reviews!
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