| Title: Hidden Truths
| 09 Oct 2014 1:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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This talking chapter is just as aggravating as movies and books, in that one quick sentence would inform everyone of the situation, but Snape and Black, and each other group, all spend 20 minutes arguing, etc. and cause problems. It's like knocking on the door of a house that is on fire, and instead of screaming, "Fire," you apologize for the disturbance at this time of night, and hope you'll be forgiven once the homeowner hears your explanation, and you really would have waited until a more suitable hour to knock except that it's sort of an emergency, etc., etc., etc. As the author of this fanfic, you would have had the ability if not the motivation to make this scene better than the book.
| Title: Hidden Truths
| 18 Jul 2009 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Oh man! But I don't have time to read the next chapter, so I'm going to have to leave it here. Darn cliffies :P.
Author's Response: Aww and just wait till you find out what Peter says.
Oooh, nice twist!
-P.G.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like throwing them in there every now and then.
| Title: Hidden Truths
| 12 May 2008 6:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Persephone Chiara (Anonymous)
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Good one!!! Mmmmmmmm, angry Severus!
Peter a shape-slipper, now THAT is an interesting twist!^^
Author's Response: Yes, I wanted to make him a bit more of nasty character than in the books, as you can see he's still a coward, but he's a sly nasty coward!
OK I did not see peter as a slipper - just a regular animagus
sev sure is pissed and its only gonna be worse when he wakes up
why didn't remus tell anyone his suspicions when he first learned about pettigrew......
hmmmm
Author's Response: Well, Remus only just learned about Pettigrew when he checked the map and then he came down to see if it was true, so he didn't have time to say anything! And Sev is going to be in quite a temper . . .ooo boy!
good chapter, alot going on in this one, going after sirius into the willow was brave as they don't know what they were dealing with, moony and snape bringing up the rear and peter a shape shifter was a eye opener, can't wait for more
Author's Response: Great and you shall have it, as soon as I post it up!
hah, great twist! I didn't see that coming at all!
Author's Response: Great, I didn't want to be predictable!
| Title: Hidden Truths
| 16 Apr 2008 4:22 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Now that's a wicked twist on the original! Loved the interaction between harry, Sirius, and Severus! Great job, hurry up and post the next one please!
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm writing it as fast as I can!
What!? That stupid rat is a shape-slipper?? That was an unexpected twist. Sev isn't going to be happy when he wakes! Great chapter and I really hope the next one is out quickly becuase I'm dying to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Ha, surpised you then! Good I was hoping it wasn't too obvious. No, Sev isn't going to be happy with anyone when he wakes up and more secrets will be revealed in the next chapter!
| Title: Hidden Truths
| 16 Apr 2008 2:51 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Wow! Awesome twist! I love it! Update soon!
Author's Response: I will tomorrow night!
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