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Reviews For Hide Yourself From A Prisoner
Author's Response: Ah maybe and maybe not!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted this Peter to be more evil than the one in the books and to be slightly more powerful as well.
Very exciting chapter; I enjoyed the patronus scene the most. -P.G. Author's Response: Yes, but they need to get Pettigrew first for evidence before they can prove Sirius is innocent. I'm glad you liked my patronuses, I tried to make them different from the book to reflect their different memories.
Author's Response: Yes, they'd better run, very fast!
Author's Response: Well, Severus is hot tempered and he has done a remarkable job of not exploding so far, considering the danger all of the kids put themselves into. They could have so easily been killed.
sev and remmy are gonna kill harry and aria mind you uncle remmy is unavailable for a bit so I think sev will do it for him sigh however if I remember the story correctly hermione and a time turner and buckbeak all have a job to do somewhere in all of this and malfoy is still a sodding prat LOL Author's Response: Yes Malfoy certainly is and the kids are dead meat, no two ways about it!
great chapter! Author's Response: yes, it is! I thought it was funny too!
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad I surprised you with Peter's sneakiness, it made sense to me to make him a slipper too, although a rogue one, to show there is a good and bad side to everything, and it jsut made him more interesting to work with. I'm not sure what the plural of Patronus is, I jsut add an "s" to it, and fudge really is an interfering busybody.
Author's Response: You'll see when you read the next chapter, it's posted now!
Author's Response: All right, now we're talking. |
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