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Reviews For Hide Yourself From A Prisoner
Author's Response: True enough, he didn't. And you're right, all kids get into trouble, especially these particular ones. The only difference here is that there were consequences for doing so, instead of rewards.
It was really well done. I love that you had Sev chew both Aria and Harry out. Awesome! Author's Response: Yes, I felt that both of them deserved to face Sev's wrath after what they pulled. I'm glad you liked it, some people thought Sev was too harsh with Harry.
Author's Response: Oh good, I was worried he might have been a bit too harsh, even though he did keep his promise.
I understand Severus, really, I do. After my Mom died I basically took over caring for my then 11 year old sister. She often got into trouble etc. because, like all goddam teenagers, she was impulsive, reckless, fun-loving and YOUNG. I'd not have had it any other way and now she is a mature 18 year old who has never been spanked, reduced to tears by punishment or otherwise. Only once, in a fit of rage, did I strike her but I apologised for it at least 100 times. I think Severus being a tad obsessed with rules, discipline & control is in character (Remember his rant about Harry in "The Prince's Tale"?) and you use it well, very well in fact. But once again I cannot bring myself to support this kind of punishment. Much of such aggression springs from fear of losing a beloved child, I know that. But neither my Mom (Who is now in heaven) nor my Dad ever hurt me or terrified me. No child should fear those who gave them life, no matter how much they are in trouble. Author's Response: Severus is obssessed with rules and discipline because it is so necessary for the young wizards to have them in order to be safe with their magic and with each other. But I think that my Severus is much gentler and kinder than in the books. In a way, he backed himself into a corner when he issued the ultimatum back after the Hogsmeade incident--If you get into anymore trouble, I'll take a leaf from your godfather's book and give you a spanking. He intended that as a threat only--something he never figured he'd have to carry out, since he trusted Harry to listen to him and not get into trouble. But Harry did get into trouble--the worst sort of trouble and therefore in the name of consistent discipline and always doing what you say, he had to punish him that way. Also, please remember that Sev did NOT like doing that, even Harry noticed it, he had to force himself to do it, and afterwards he says to Harry in a voice that is very close to tears, "Don't EVER make me do that again." He also thinks to himself that that was the last time he will ever punish his son that way--since Harry is too old for it and he hates doing it anyway, though of course he isn't going to tell his son that for awhile, and Harry is not afraid of his father, indeed he loves Severus. The one he really feared was Vernon. And like I said before, this is characteristic of a rather strict parent like Severus, and it is not something I personally advocate.
is minerva gonna kill ron harry and hermione for their parts? overall I think everyone - including sev and remus were reckless but if the adults are the ones in charge then they have to stick to what they say and they have a point about adults being able to risk themselves with caution unlike kids but sometimes even adults go overboard- I think they were right to keep sev from killing sirius - knocking him out was a side effect not the intended idea but I am glad sev assured harry he loves him and notices the changes he has made in his life and behaviour good job Author's Response: Yes he did, and she's in for more trouble from her uncle--it's rough when you've got two parental figures on your ass. Minerva doesn't yet know about her three lions participating in this little adventure, but she won't be happy. Still, Sev did punish them pretty thoroughly with his detention so . . she might think it was enough. And yes, Sev does love Harry to pieces, which is why it's so hard for him to punish his son.
Author's Response: You'll find out as soon as I post this next chapter!
Author's Response: You know a lot of people wish that . . .! *grins evilly*
Author's Response: Quite right and boy do i agree with those last ones! LOL!
Author's Response: Aw, I hope you feel better soon! I hat eit when I'm sick and can't write. The whole thing with Harry hexing Sev had me laughing as I wrote it--it take son a whole new dimension when Sev's Harry's father, because then it's like OMG--I just hurt my dad!! I hope he's okay and then now I'm so dead! Yes there was a bit of irony there for both of them, but I wanted Severus to bury the hatchet with Sirius and what better way to do it then to have Sev break Black out of jail? Plus, it shows that although Sev can be a stickler for rules, he also knows when rules have to be broken, so in that regard he's a Slytherin. I hate the Dursleys too, they are, in my opinion, as bad as Old Voldy, only they don't get killed or put in jail the way they should've. And I'm sure Sev felt like kicking himself too after saying that to Harry and then hoping he'd stay out of trouble so he didn't actually have to do it. But . . .in the end he knows consistency is very important as a parent, and I wanted to stress that here, since i see so many parents these days who are never consistent and as a result their kids are little monsters (happens all the time in Barnes & Noble where I work). Draco DOES get in trouble for the Wolfsbane, nothing like how he SHOULD be in trouble--as in a trip to Azkaban or expelled--but Sev does what he can, LOL! Thanks and I hope to have the next one up fairly quickly, it's my birthday today! |
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