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Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 7:14 am
Reviewer: SeverussssS (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoo, another great chapter! Poor Neville. Lol.

    *waits for next chapter*

    Author's Response: Thanks and I should have one up by tonight!
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 4:33 am
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    sigh harry is in trouble and poor old neville

    love how sev comforts and cares for the boy after the punishment is done - with is hands and his back and all of that
    wait till he finds out about black being in the tower he is gonna have a bird!!!

    Author's Response: I know, those two are like trouble magnets.  And yes, once the punishment is over, Sev will forgive, though mayb enot forget! And you're right about Severus having a canary once he finds out!
Title: A Beagle At Hogwarts 05 Apr 2008 4:29 am
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    yep snape said if you get in trouble with one prof you get it with me too

    poor old rosie - being hungry she is not gonna go down without a fight

    draco is a prat he could have leveitated the box and at the end of the day if he wanted more sweets his mother would send them the next day

    Author's Response: You're right and draco should have thought about that before he tried to hurt poo Rosie.  harry should have also thought before he acted, but then again he has a serious problem with that, and Severus knows and will correct it! Thanks for reviewing Bren!
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 2:54 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Rosie! I hope she'll help them track Sirius down. Good chapter and I hope you'll be able to update again soon!

    Author's Response: She'll try, she lives to hunt, like any beagle!
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 2:27 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely loved it! Severus's punishment was fair and even made me laugh at one point. His massage after Harry's detention was a nice touch and reassured his son that he still loved him. And Rosie and the business with Sirius was wonderfully entertaining. Love the plot twists!

    Author's Response: Happy to hear it and please keep reading!
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 1:47 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! I agree totally with Severus's punishment, it was fair and harry should get the message now! Rosie steals the show though!

    Author's Response: yes she does and thanks for your review!
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, well at least Severus didn't scar Harry for life, I agree with the punishment completely. The comment about the chart for feeding Rosie was priceless, it's totally something Sev would do. It was really sweet that Sev noticed that Harry was stiff and offered him the massage after his punishment. It'll be intresting to see if Rosie is able to find Sirius. Very curious to see what's going to happen next and whose causing the ruckus in Slytherin. Keep up the awesome work, I'm really loving this story. Please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thanks for the great review.  I like to have Severus giving out normal kinds of punishments the way most parents would give their children.  The chart was inspired by my sister, who threatened the same thing to her teenagers when they got a puppy and weren't taking care of it.  They shaped up really quick! And you'll find out what's going on in Slytherin soon! 
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 1:14 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    damn that prat! i hope they all find out that sirius was just looking for the blasted rat! percy is not as innocent as he seems huh!? love the way this story is going!

    Author's Response: Thanks again, and just wait till you see what was going on in the Slytherin dorm while Sirius was creeping around GT!
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 1:14 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    damn that prat! i hope they all find out that sirius was just looking for the blasted rat! percy is not as innocent as he seems huh!? love the way this story is going!

    Author's Response: Thanks and yes, percy is not the innocent goody-two-shoes he seems, haha!
Title: Midnight Intruder 05 Apr 2008 1:00 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    hahah! go rosie! rosie is the star of the episode again :) Good scene between Severus & Harry - I have been missing their interactions.

    Author's Response: Yes, Rosie is my favorite supporting character.  Beagles rule! And Severus and Harry will be interacting a lot more soon, don't worry.

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