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Reviews For Hide Yourself From A Prisoner
Author's Response: Well, at this point Severus is being ultra cautious, and trying to instill in Harry some degree of caution, since with the fact that he is a spy out in the open, Severus is worried some of the students might try to target his son for being the offspring of a traitor and then there's Sirius to worry about also. And yes, Rosie will have a great time in the dorm with all of them!
Author's Response: Thanks and I'll try as you know. Rosie's a good ice breaker though!
Author's Response: Yes, and I did think of it, but actually, it'd be too complicated, since Neil has a perfectly good teacher in NJ and wouldn't want to move and leave his family.
And let's face it, Harry's thirteen and is obviously going to be taken by a pretty girl. He jumped all over Cho, and she was supposedly the prettiest girl in Hogwarts..or one of them, at least. I am anxious to see where you take this. I loved the line: "Better start running, Neville, ‘cause something tells me that little creep's gonna be on your arse every minute, just like the professor..." That made me smile. Those darn students and their Snape chatter. *shakes head* Good job, and keep writing! Author's Response: Thanks so much and I think people are misinterpreting Aria here, because of first impressions. She's the new girl and yes, she is pretty, but she's NOT a model or anything close to it, or a fashion plate either, she does have a beautiful smile, but there's a lot more to her than that. She's had as rough a life as Harry and indeed has some of the same problems he did, though she hides it better, you'll see that in a future chapter. She also has some unusual abilities, which she reveals as she chooses only to certain people. As for Trelawney . . .she was caught off guard by Dumbledore's announcement--ha! I believe a Mary Sue is one of those perfect little drone girls who simply exist for a main character to fall in love with and Aria definitely is not one, I don't write them and she's got plenty of personality, wait and see!
Author's Response: yeah Sybil and her dramatics! Merlin save us, as Sev would say. Glad you like Moony's niece, she's quite a character, as you'll see later on.
Author's Response: Thanks and so glad you liked the first chapter!
Author's Response: You'll find out why in a future chapter, don't worry and I'll be updating probably tomorrow! Thanks for all your reviews!
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks and I look forwar dto posting the next one!
as for the apology - I was not too impressed with it and I hope Snape won't be either. He never struck me as the type to enjoy a public airing of emotions (unless it's humiliating his enemies, which this doesn't quite fit). Author's Response: Nope, not really, but she is a bit different from your average British girl, and the boys there think she's kind of exotic. There's a lot more to Aria than looks and you'll see that later. The apology, well, you weren't meant to be too impressed with it, though Dumbledore was sincere, he was also hoping to pressure Harry into being his little puppet again, which isn't going to happen anytime soon. The one good thing the apology did was to show the students that Snape was not and never had been a bad guy. |
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