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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Hidden Truths 31 Dec 2008 5:48 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, nice twist!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I like throwing them in there every now and then.
Title: To Save A Life 31 Dec 2008 5:20 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I was worried when Aria led Buckbeak away because earlier you said the Dumbledore was confining the Dementors in the forest and she does have the tendency to go in there, which could be potentially dangerous. I'm so glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter :D.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: She does but luckily Buckbeak will keep her occupied.  It's nice to just be able to read straight through, isn't it?
Title: An Unfortunate Discovery 31 Dec 2008 5:04 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope the Sirius Black part is coming up soon--that's what I'm most looking forward to at this point.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: It is, in a little bit.  But first they need to save Buckbeak.
Title: Caught! 31 Dec 2008 4:37 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I think what would make this story better is if your Remus was less like your Snape. I think you've got Snape's personality perfect, but your Remus seems to strict. I feel like he should be more of a follower and a less strict disciplinarian. He even referred to Aria as a 'disrespectful brat' in the chapter and I don't think Remus would ever call children brats. I guess I'd just like to see more of a difference between Sev and Remus' personalities.

    On the scarier side of things, I think Sev is going to really angry next chapter, uh-oh...

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: If he does that's because he's patterning himself after Severus, if you'll remember at the beginning of this story, Remus asked Sev for advice on parenting and he told him kids need rules and consistency and so he is trying to act like Severus since the kids seem to get into so much trouble.
Title: Unexpected Gifts 31 Dec 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I love the twins...

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: So do I, they're fun to write!
Title: Vanishing Act 31 Dec 2008 1:45 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Ron is so irrational, good grief... I noticed that you said Snape took a dog biscuit out of his pocket for Rosie, lol! He's carrying around dog biscuits now!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Sev does have a soft spot for Rosie, even if he says he doesn't.  And Ron has always been irrational and prone to jump to conclusions.

Title: Chimera Dreams 30 Dec 2008 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I loved Aria's matchmaking attempts; very enjoyable.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Aria's such a little minx, and only she would have the guts to dare matchmake for Sev, LOL!
Title: A Beagle At Hogwarts 30 Dec 2008 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I think Severus should have sent him a howler. I also think that he's going to be very angry with Harry--it was bound to happen sooner or later.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Severus prefers to scold his son in private, that way no one gets to see him lose his cool, at least in my opinion.  And yes, he is going to be quite angry with Harry's loss of control.  But that's the age--13 was for my nephews at least the age when they rebelled over everything and were prepetually PO'd about something almost all the time. 
Title: Dead Man Walking 30 Dec 2008 9:16 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I really enjoyed Snape's comment about Trelawney seeing dead people in the shower, lol.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: That's one of my faves, I got the idea from a popular book all my customers at B&N were buying called Do Dead People Watch You Shower?  It was a paranormal book written by a medium, I think, since I didn't read it and the title just cracked me up.  All i can say is, Lord I hope no ghost is peeking at me!
Title: The Professor's Son 30 Dec 2008 8:27 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That went surprisingly better than I expected. I think the beagle helped, lol.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Dogs always help break the ice, especially cute beagles like Rosie.  Thanks again for reviewing!

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