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Reviews For Sic Vita Est
The boils were a nice touch.
~~Lady Alexandra~~
You did the characters great!! Scorpia
Author's Response: Thank you XD
The first few paragraphs really drew me in. I love the set-up. The words you chose made it so easy to visualize, and you did a nice job of letting the reader draw some conclusions. Some great lines in here (the mention of Fluffy made me crack up). The whole thing with the Dursleys was hilarious. I liked how you changed things, and yet kept a lot the same, like Harry grabbing his stuff and getting out of there... ... only to run into Snape. Perfectly evil cliff-hanger. :-D Author's Response: Yeah there's more - like another 9 chapters or something (hopefully soon to be 10 chapters) but yeah you don't need to go running off to find it on FF.net - it'll all be up here eventually. But probably in like weekly blocks because I'm lazy and have limited internet action XD Thanks for the review - I wanted to make sure that a lot of the story was sort of the same yet different because I think it's easier when there is a little bit different with each chapter from the original book, because then it all adds up to be completely different but it's sort of believable. I hope that made sense (I have a bad habit of sprouting out total crap) but yeah C:
This sounds really, really, horrible but I just saw you posted the story here and had to say something. I can't remember exactly what happens in this chapter, but I think I reviewed it on ff.net. Anyway, I have to be at work in like five minutes, so this isn't really a review (in case you hadn't figured that out it) but I wanted to tell you how wonderful it is that you posted here. Thank, so, so much for posting here and I swear I'll give a real review for the next chapter. Anyway, go to go. Thanks again! Author's Response: Yeah I know, don't worry, I review and dash all the time XD Oh yeah and thanks for making the suggestion - I've been on this site for ages but only as a reader, and I didn't really think about uploading because I am made of the most awesome brand of laziness out there. No seriously I am. It's a wonder I actually managed to write 10 chapters of this story and not let it fester in my document folder (which has been the fate of a lot of my other stories, let me assure you). But don't worry - I like this story enough to continue it definitely XD. Anyway thanks for the nice review and the next chapter on P&S will probably be up in like a week or something. One needs to draw out the experience C: (and anyway it gives me time to actually write chapter 11 too |
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