Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 06 Apr 2008 8:29 pm
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! I wonder whose eyes were watching!

    Author's Response:

    Guess all you want, I won't tell you whose eyes they were for a little while yet :) Thanks for the review

Title: Chapter 1 01 Apr 2008 1:05 am
Reviewer: Smorefan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job! Can't wait to see more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'll see what I can do!
Title: Chapter 1 31 Mar 2008 2:14 am
Reviewer: SnowStalker (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful first chapter! Who did the eyes belong to? (*grins* I know, I know...I'll find out soon enough, I'm sure...I just hate waiting...). I was wondering if you have a beta? (I almost hate asking that, because I'm always afraid that people will think I think the story is crap or something, but could be made decent with a beta...or something like that...but that's not the case, though I did find a few small errors, but I really can't help it--I'm always finding mistakes in writings; I don't go looking for them, but I find them anyway...). Whenever I find a fic that I like, I always ask if the author has a beta, if they haven't mentioned that they do have one, because I'd like to be a beta and have a chance to help (even if it's just a little bit) with the story. So...if you don't have a beta, would you like one?? *cue puppy dog eyes* ...*coughs* Sorry...I realize this review probably rambled quite a bit...but it's a very good fic so far, keep it up and update soon!!

    Author's Response:

    I must say you give a wonderful review. No I don't have a beta was you can doubtless see and would be deilghted to have one, in fact I started writing the next chapter last night so you will be most useful. Email me if you would and I'll give you a broad overviw of the plot (if you're super nice!) and you can then let me know if you really want to beta this story. Cheers.

Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 11:14 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    NIce start to the story. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it. I like the idea of an interfering Dobby.

    Author's Response: Yes I like Dobby, I find he can be so useful in a plot. Thanks for the review, I'll be trying to get the next chapter up as soon as possible. I got too many nice reviews from people wanting to read more which made me feel guilty for putting this story on the back-burner
Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 8:23 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! A story with beautifully descriptions! So many stories just list events but you take the time and effort to show your readers, rather than tell them, what they should be seeing in their mind's eye. I love it so far. So who's the hidden one?

    Author's Response: You shall have to wait and see, what kind of story does not have even a little suspense? Thank you, getting lovely reviews inspires me to write so feel free to continue writing lovely reviews.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 8:09 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very interesting. I hope to see more of it soon!

    Author's Response:

    I'm afraid the next update shall not be for a little while, thanks for the review though.

Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 4:29 pm
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful start. I look forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I try. I'm afraid you will have to wait a little while for the next update though, I have another story that I much prefer writing that has first preference.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 4:13 pm
Reviewer: jam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good writing. Keep going. I like the fact that you
    write well and I don't have to guess what you mean.
    I usually don't read very far on those fics.

    Author's Response:

    I like reading awfully written fanfiction. It annoys me so much I get inspired to prove people can actually write fanfiction using (mostly) correct grammer and spelling, in fact the worse it is the more likely I am to write. Thanks for the review

Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 4:03 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Kinda short, but a great begining. Hope for more dialogue in the next chapter.

    Please update soon! I can't wait to see where this story goes!

    Author's Response: I'm afraid updates to this story will be slow but I'll write a longer chapter next time, I hear around 5000 words is best. Not to worry, the next chapter will have far more dialogue. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 3:00 pm
Reviewer: precissely (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's wonderful! very skillfully written and even this short chapter makes me addikted to your story/
    Thhaks a lot!

    Author's Response: Thank you, unfortunately you'll have to wait a bit longer for your next fix as I'm writing a different story that has preference over this one. Do not worry though, I have every intention of finishing this story....eventually.

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