Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 10:04 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Harry isn't taking this well at all. The depression is getting at him. The story looks to be promising so long as it doesn't become a suicide type thing where Harry takes the depression over boared. The only thing I would concider so far would be possibly legthening the chapters. Other then that, this story looks like it might be interesting.

    Author's Response: Don't worry, Harry is just going to be depressed, not suicidal. It's really a trade off, longer chapters mean you have to wait longer for updates, but if that's what's wanted I am willing to comply. Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Mar 2008 8:54 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start. Can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response:

    Nor can I! Don't worry I'm messing. Thanks for the review.


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