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Title: Chapter 3 01 Jan 2009 10:51 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Definitely worth the wait. (: Really funny. Make a bit more out of the dialogue - think about pauses and stuff. Like Harry gave in way too quickly; "“I’m sure I don’t know what you mean. Alright. It... " There should have been a gap, maybe a line(?) between mean. and Alright. Please update soon. (:
Title: Chapter 3 01 Jan 2009 9:50 am
Reviewer: Lumiere (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohmigods, I love your story!!! I can't wait to read more! I hope you'll be posting again soon!

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