Well written, with vivid description. An interesting start, I'm intrigued.
lol
I found something i like!!!!!
I'm definitely going to continue reading this.
I wonder why Harry shrunk.
I wonder what he is....?
I about fell on the floor from laughter at the first part of the chapter. Great first chapter, I can tell this is going tio be a great story!
"squishy or bouncy" -- ROFLMAO!
A fun read... I can't wait to see where it goes. Incredible how Harry's capable of writing such a calm note instead of screaming like a banshee all the way to Hogwarts and kicking down Dumbledore's door. :-D
Very interesting! So what has Harry become, an elf or a sprite or something like that? And what does this mean, that he was half-human all along?
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