I love how you have described the manor, especially the dining room. Neffy is a very sweet character, almost between Ron and Hermione in personality, and her interaction with Harry is very realistic.
WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND CLIFFHANGERS?????????
Is the language you quote latin? Very good chapter, :)
Author's Response: Actually, it's based off a mixture of Ancient Greek and Egyptian. And thanks for all the reviews!
good chapter! poor little Harry.
Great chapter, I really love this story! The sex discussion was very funny, considering...
| Title: Exploration part I
| 07 Apr 2008 11:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Dark (Signed)
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wow. this has got to be one of the best non-human harry stories i've ever read. keep it up =]
Oh no, not another evil cliffy! =)
Great chapter, love this story. Thanks.
this is a great story, wondered where you were taking me at the start, harry being a sphinx is certainly different, the panthers and the rest do have nice rooms and you have been very descriptive which is great in a fic such as this, is the alarm a intruder alert, i wonder who it is?
| Title: Exploration part I
| 06 Apr 2008 9:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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A lovely chapter. So, sand boxes for grown-ups? And you leave us with a cliffie. This makes it hard to wait!
dude, i'm so loving this story!
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