aww. I love this story. I've never read anything like it. Congrats. I hope you keep posting and i cant wait to see what happens. What will they think at hogwarts? at least voldie is gone unless there is a new evil dark wizard. perhaps lucius malfoy has decided he wants to kill harry for dystroying voldie, or maybe ill just have to wait for you to write it. lol.
| Title: Mindmeet
| 09 May 2008 7:28 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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loved this chapter. He is so cute and severus is so good with him and Neffy.
What a terrific story! Please--keep going! Keep going!
You're doing a wonderful job capturing the way a small child really feels about things: the quick change of feelings, the vastness of spaces, the impatience with being small. The need to SEE a room, not just be told about it, the need to express feelings, these you have done very well!
"...somehow managing to sound dangerous and safe at the same time..."
Here, I believe, is the appeal that the character of Severus Snape holds for most of us who appreciate him! Well said!
What an interesting premise! I really look forward to reading more and more of your story!
Your sentence "If anything, he aught to be an elder among panthers" should be changed from "aught" (which means "zero") to "OUGHT", as in "should". Not trying to be critical, just helpful; forgive me.
Awe... Harry finally has a parent!
You continue to amaze me with your knack for detail, it was truly beautiful work with how you described the ceremony. I could picture everything so well!
I'm very happy you updated this story, it really is an interesting one. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to find out what you have planned for us next!
Very cool! I liked the ceremony a lot and the way Severus tucked Harry in and gave him a home now was very sweet! Awww! Will we find out what Harry's sphinx name means?
Yay an update! :) Oh Brilliant its really getting interesting now, Hogwarts next?
lol Snape dancing! the jive? (P.s What does Maahes mean? i suppose we find out in the next chapter?)
:)))
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