Beautiful depiction of the mind meet. This is such a wonderful, original story, I really can't stop reading lol!
Poor Harry. I expect, however, that Severus has prepared a special room for him. Beautifully written and very sweet
Poor Severus, being asked if he loved Harry shoved him way outside his comfort zone and I thought his reaction was very in character.
Very sweet Harry/ Remus interaction. I love your depiction of the house elves.
Poor Remus lol! I thought the floo system was a very clever idea and I loved the Harry/Neffy interaction
I love how you have described the manor, especially the dining room. Neffy is a very sweet character, almost between Ron and Hermione in personality, and her interaction with Harry is very realistic.
Very interesting chapter.
Great development of the sphinx culture. I really love your character interactions.
Oooo... Interesting cliff-hanger. I loved the way in which you depicted the panthers, they all had distinct personalities and I loved the subtle flashes of mythology. I expect Roo is from Ancient Egypt?
Beautifully written and very sweet. Poor Harry, it rather reminds me of Terry Pratchett's depiction of the reincarnated Abbot in 'Theif of Time'; the adult brain is there but the body, with it's infant emotions and impulses, often overrules.
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