Title: More Lessons
| 13 Nov 2008 6:51 am
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Reviewer: Katie (Anonymous)
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Thank you for taking the time to write - I always get sucked right into this awesome new 'world' you created with HP. I also highly appreciate reading your views in the End Notes - somehow it makes the 'world' so much more tangible. Please keep writing! Katie (psy202@comcast.net)
Good chapter! I appreciate the background in clan structure. It helps me see the relationship possibilities between the clans more clearly.
I Hope you update quickly. I'd love to get more information about how Draco became a sphinx
Awwww! An update! Great. I was afraid this fanfic will lie dead forever. It was rather cute how much Harry needed to be told that no way he would have to share Severus with Draco. Completely loveable. Mila
I'm so glad you updated it's been a long time... pouts!I'm also happy that Severus is not going to take in Drace, it seems like the majority of the stories out there always go that way. I agree with you about Harry still being young and needing a nap in the afternoon, even if Snape did blame it on his injuries, as a parent myself I think that was very slytherin of him. Please continue to write this amazing story that I love finding new chapters of!
Title: More Lessons
| 12 Nov 2008 5:02 am
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Reviewer: shan (Anonymous)
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Ok. I've read and I have to tell you, if you hadn't included that super long chapter end note, I would have had a problem. SOmething along the lines of WHERE THE HECK IS THE REST OF THE CHAPTER??!?!?!?!?
But, that being said and I having read what you wrote, I can happily say that The history lesson was rather boring, but good to know, because some of the stuff about sphinx' weren't clear. But now they are and I'm happiy, and waiting for the next chapter.
DON't take so long next time!!!
I'm so glad that you have updated. I love how you make Harry seventeen, but with the mind of a young child. This is such as original story, and I'm really enjoying how you've created an intricate explanation of how the clans work.
Please update soon!
ABOUT TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! NOw I have to go read.... Be right back
Title: Instinct
| 26 Oct 2008 3:54 pm
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Reviewer: TangledPencils (Anonymous)
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I just found your story and I'm really enjoying it. Please continue soon.
aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!! no!!! you can't leave it there!!! omg, i SO LOVE THIS!!! PLEASE POST SOON, THIS IS AMAZING. i LOVE THE YOUNG hARRY THING, AND I kind of figured out Sev and Draco's conversation you get ten frogs. Awesome. I'll be waiting for more
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