| Title: Chapter 1
| 04 Apr 2008 9:50 am
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| Reviewer: Johnnyonthespot (Anonymous)
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WOW!! this is good please keep updating.
:D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Great start. Your summary is what go me to read this story at first,very mysterious and intriguing. Just like the story itself! Well I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I started writing a more complicated summary explaining the situation a bit more, but then this came to me, and I decided less was more. I'm glad you like it.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 04 Apr 2008 4:22 am
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| Reviewer: spinningleaves (Anonymous)
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I've just found this site and your's is the first story I've read! Wow I can only hope the rest are all like this! You've so completely grabbed my attention with this start! Well Done!
Author's Response: I only just found this site about a week or so ago; it's definitely one of the better ones out there if you like Harry/Severus mentor stories. Thanks.
this is looking good so far, so dumbledore, i take it kingsley and severus found harry and harry recognised severus, so i take it he has seen him before, can't wait to find out more
Author's Response: It was Kingsley, but he doesn't really come in much (I almost had Tonks until I considered her age; I wasn't sure if she'd even be an auror yet). And maybe on seeing Severus before...I'm not saying yet :)
Intresting start, curious to see where this one is going to lead. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to keep the updates coming
Nice start to the story. I'm wondering why Harry reacted to Severus and exactly what he thinks of as home.
Author's Response: I'm glad I have you curious. Severus is probably wondering the same thing.
Very interesting start. I can't wait to see where you go from here.
Author's Response: Thanks
Wow. You are very good at this! I can't wait to read more! Your writing style is very reminiscent of JK Rowling, and I'm seriously impressed. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update often, but no promises.
Hmmm, this sounds like it will be a very interesting story. Poor little Harry, he's so cute though ^^. I am very curious as to why Harry responded to Severus and what caused such a great amount of accidental magic. It must have been quite bad for little Harry to accidently blow up his relatives. I also am curious as to why Severus is taking Harry, does it have something to do with Lily? I hope to find out what will happen next soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Nice start!!!
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