Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 22 Feb 2011 2:55 am
Reviewer: Tina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice concept, but needs a beta's touch. Way too many spelling/grammatical errors and history should be worked into the story rather than a time line. No one knows who the characters are and should be introduced within the story as it's written so that we may connect with them emotionally. I know it takes a lot more work, but it's really the only way you can get away with having OC's in fanfiction. (Believe me, I know from experience!) All in all, I really like the concept of your story and there is tons of potential here.
Title: Chapter 1 02 Apr 2008 7:13 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    so i am guessing that sev and james were lovers...and Lilly carried their baby to term...is that it?

    Author's Response:

    yeah that's it. Thanks for the reveiw.

     

Title: Chapter 1 01 Apr 2008 4:12 pm
Reviewer: LaToya_Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great start keep it up and update soon pls plspls

    Author's Response: Thank you. I should have the next chapter done either later today or tomorrow.
Title: Chapter 1 01 Apr 2008 11:13 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks like I am the first review great hahaha. I like this and think you are at a really nice start. I like the timetable you have on the peoples births that will help. I was reading this on Fanfiction.net so just hope you update the same time I love reading on potionsandsnitches. I just love Vampire Severus fics can't wait for more. Keep it up please.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I should have the next chapter up soon.

     


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