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Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 05 Dec 2022 12:58 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was quite an entertaining start to your story!
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 18 Apr 2021 4:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very good start, I like tying DADA post into the story.
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 31 May 2012 1:35 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it when Harry takes iniciative and doesn't go to Dursleys like a lamb.
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 23 May 2011 4:06 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    What an imaginative, hilarious idea - sending Severus back as Harry for a time. Well, the truth about Harry's homelife is really going to make an impact now...
    Looking forward to seeing what method Severus used to change shape, ans whether he'll be capable and allowed to use magic...
    Good job!
    misundersnape...
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 02 May 2008 10:01 pm
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    "She had been the only other teacher in the room and had been very quiet the whole time."

    Probably you should have told us Minerva was in the room before now. Otherwise, it's like she mysteriously pops into existence in the room in the middle of the conversation. (And not in the good, magic way.)

    Otherwise, this is a good beginning. :)

    -K

    Author's Response:

    will work on that.

Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 19 Apr 2008 7:42 am
Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Must put more on soooooon! This is great. Good idea. Written well.

    Author's Response: i will. no worries! thank you for reading! i will update soon!
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 16 Apr 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this sounded great when i read the bit about the story and it certainly hasn't disapointed me, i do feel very sorry for severus

    Author's Response:

    thank you...severus had much to learn!

Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 14 Apr 2008 12:57 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! So glad to see you posted one here!

    This is a very cool storyline and I'm eager to see where you go with it! I like how you started off contrasting Sev's past with Tobias and Vernon--since the two are very similar--both are mean abusive bastards. One question though, does Severus have his wand and can he use his magic to defend himself if Vernon tries to seriously hurt him? I'd say he should, if it becomes absolutely necessary, then he could beat the crap out of the damn guy! How do they plan to get Harry out of the chamber since nobody speaks Parseltongue?

    Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: thank you! yeah sev is in for a rude awakening!  i would think that since Snape is there to keep up appearances it would be odd if he always uses magic...so he will only be able to use magic for extreme circumstances. i wonder how sev will get along only on his wits! as for getting harry out of the chamber i believe that I will go the way of the DH and use Ron since he was there when he heard harry speak parseltounge....we will just have to see what happens!
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 14 Apr 2008 12:23 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Severus got his summer started off with a bang--literally. I sure hope Dumbledore checks on Severus more often than he checks on Harry. ;-)

    Author's Response: For severus's sake i hope he does too.
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 13 Apr 2008 11:59 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good start. I read your reviews and you say that you changed the "Sev". Just wanted to let you know, it's still there. I'd also love to see this as a full fledged story with Harry's POV in here, too. I know it isn't part of the challenge and you might want to follow that, but if you reconsider, it would be great to hear Harry's version and how he's getting along in the chamber and how the staff is trying to get him to come out.

    Author's Response: yep...your right...i will be changing that as soon as i am finished with all the reviews

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