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Reviews For In Potter's Shoes
Looking forward to seeing what method Severus used to change shape, ans whether he'll be capable and allowed to use magic... Good job! misundersnape...
Probably you should have told us Minerva was in the room before now. Otherwise, it's like she mysteriously pops into existence in the room in the middle of the conversation. (And not in the good, magic way.) Otherwise, this is a good beginning. :) -K Author's Response: will work on that.
Author's Response: i will. no worries! thank you for reading! i will update soon!
Author's Response: thank you...severus had much to learn!
This is a very cool storyline and I'm eager to see where you go with it! I like how you started off contrasting Sev's past with Tobias and Vernon--since the two are very similar--both are mean abusive bastards. One question though, does Severus have his wand and can he use his magic to defend himself if Vernon tries to seriously hurt him? I'd say he should, if it becomes absolutely necessary, then he could beat the crap out of the damn guy! How do they plan to get Harry out of the chamber since nobody speaks Parseltongue? Keep up the good work! Author's Response: thank you! yeah sev is in for a rude awakening! i would think that since Snape is there to keep up appearances it would be odd if he always uses magic...so he will only be able to use magic for extreme circumstances. i wonder how sev will get along only on his wits! as for getting harry out of the chamber i believe that I will go the way of the DH and use Ron since he was there when he heard harry speak parseltounge....we will just have to see what happens!
Author's Response: For severus's sake i hope he does too.
Author's Response: yep...your right...i will be changing that as soon as i am finished with all the reviews |
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