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Reviews For In Potter's Shoes
Author's Response: thank you kreacher! i am glad you like the chapter! yep harry is out of the hell hole and there is a bit more of this story to come!
Author's Response: yeah...who knew? lol. thanx for the review!
I kinda hoped that Harry would stay with Severus... But I won't complain. Surely you have your reasons to choose Remus as Harry's guardian. Well, it was a great chapter. I hope we won't be waiting long for the next one :-) Author's Response: yes for the sake of this story he is a prsel mouth. as an author i tried to think outside of the box. and stories were Snape becomes guardian are everywhere. i am trying to be as original as possible! and if James were still alive he would want Remus to be Godfather in leau of Sirius' death. I hope to have the next chapter up soon!
but... if Severus is a parselmouth, then why on earth didn't he just open the chamber to begin with and get Harry out? without going to the dursleys impersonating Harry? Author's Response: for the purpose of the challenge he needed to impersonate Harry first. that was the challenge and i was trying my best to adhere to it. thouge in retrospect that would have been a good plot to go with....maybe you should try the challenge too!
Great chapter. Author's Response: nope. i did that because Snape is needed else where. His spying skills were still needed!
Snape did not give the ancient wizard time to respond. I was only there a few days..." (Missing opening quotation marks) You are not the only Parcel tongue to attend Hogwarts..." Missing opening quotation marks, Parseltongue is spelled wrong. "...But you will not be going back to your uncle’s house. (Missing closing quotation marks) Stuff like that jar readers and it's difficult to enjoy the story as much. I love healing scenes and I can't wait to read your next chapter!! Author's Response: you're right of course...but in my defense, i wrote this at night and i am very sleepy at the moment...but i will of course fix the errors right away! |
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