Not a bad chapter. However, I would recommend that you skim through it for errors. There are several parts where a quote wasn't used when Severus started speaking. Also the proper spelling is Parseltongue or Parselmouth. Other than those errors, the chapter was good!
Author's Response: thanx i will fix it immeditately and i am glad you like this story!
Yay! They're finally getting along and Remus is harry's godfather, kind of like in my fic. And I like the idea of Severus being a parselmouth. Can't wait for the revenge part.
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