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Reviews For In Potter's Shoes
Title: An Improved Life 05 Dec 2022 1:13 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the entertaining and offbeat story.
Title: An Improved Life 18 Apr 2021 6:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a well written story
Title: An Improved Life 03 Feb 2014 2:59 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    cute littlw story
Title: An Improved Life 31 May 2012 2:46 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish I knew spell against insects
Title: An Improved Life 17 Feb 2012 11:42 pm
Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute story. Very nice. Great job
Title: An Improved Life 30 Aug 2011 6:41 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that was a brilliant story, heh heh heh! I love it when the Dursley's get what's coming to them, and the kids did a great job in that department!
Title: An Improved Life 16 Nov 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You have great heart, and enjoy telling a tale full of feeling and adventure. But you should really find a beta, or an extra one, to cover basic things like spelling. There are words common to the Harry Potter universe you really should not misspell: his mother's (and the flower's) name is spelled Lily, with only one 'l' in the middle. Likewise, the word "Quidditch" is one which should be spelled properly--otherwise it seems like you only heard about the books, rather than having read them yourself. But I still enjoyed your story, and wish you well. Thank you for all your work!
Title: An Improved Life 25 Mar 2009 4:33 am
Reviewer: N.Forest (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This a cool story. I like your writing style and I'm happy that everything worked out in the end. Just a note, is Quittadge suppose to be Quidditch? The broomstick game? Because if it is, you're spelling it wrong.
Title: An Improved Life 22 May 2008 2:18 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    good final chapter, i'm glad harry, remus and severus have sorted out there differences and that harry is now safe and living with his godfather.

    just a small point, there were quite a few spelling mistakes, other than that the story was fine

    Author's Response:

    yes...damn those spelling mistakes!

     

    thank you so much for sticking around!

Title: An Improved Life 20 May 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely finished.Enjoyed the story very much.

    Author's Response:

    thank you!  it is not my best work as i said...maybe i will try again with another challenge as soon as i get my other fic taken care of. 

    i am glad you liked it


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