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Reviews For In Potter's Shoes
Title: A Nightmare and a Rescue 31 May 2012 1:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! Pity Minerva didnt bother to check on real Harry
Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 31 May 2012 1:47 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Death to Vernon
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 31 May 2012 1:35 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it when Harry takes iniciative and doesn't go to Dursleys like a lamb.
Title: An Improved Life 17 Feb 2012 11:42 pm
Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute story. Very nice. Great job
Title: An Improved Life 30 Aug 2011 6:41 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that was a brilliant story, heh heh heh! I love it when the Dursley's get what's coming to them, and the kids did a great job in that department!
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 23 May 2011 4:06 am
Reviewer: misundersnape (Signed) [Report This]
    What an imaginative, hilarious idea - sending Severus back as Harry for a time. Well, the truth about Harry's homelife is really going to make an impact now...
    Looking forward to seeing what method Severus used to change shape, ans whether he'll be capable and allowed to use magic...
    Good job!
    misundersnape...
Title: An Improved Life 16 Nov 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You have great heart, and enjoy telling a tale full of feeling and adventure. But you should really find a beta, or an extra one, to cover basic things like spelling. There are words common to the Harry Potter universe you really should not misspell: his mother's (and the flower's) name is spelled Lily, with only one 'l' in the middle. Likewise, the word "Quidditch" is one which should be spelled properly--otherwise it seems like you only heard about the books, rather than having read them yourself. But I still enjoyed your story, and wish you well. Thank you for all your work!
Title: An Improved Life 25 Mar 2009 4:33 am
Reviewer: N.Forest (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This a cool story. I like your writing style and I'm happy that everything worked out in the end. Just a note, is Quittadge suppose to be Quidditch? The broomstick game? Because if it is, you're spelling it wrong.
Title: Healings begin 03 Sep 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: Celebwen Telcontar (Signed) [Report This]
    Erm... eh... uh... that sounded a bit like a marriage ceremony with the Godsfather/Godsson part instead of the Husband/Wife portion.

    CT

    Author's Response:

    its been a while since someone left a review for this story...and you may have a point there. i will think about fixing that up a bit

    thanks for the review!

Title: An Improved Life 22 May 2008 2:18 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    good final chapter, i'm glad harry, remus and severus have sorted out there differences and that harry is now safe and living with his godfather.

    just a small point, there were quite a few spelling mistakes, other than that the story was fine

    Author's Response:

    yes...damn those spelling mistakes!

     

    thank you so much for sticking around!


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