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Title: Healings begin 16 May 2008 2:47 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great, the idea of remus becoming harrys god-father a great idea and how it was done was a simple but effective way of dealing with the change, the dursleys need to be punished for what they have done

    Author's Response:

    no worries they will

     

Title: Healings begin 15 May 2008 5:37 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Pretty good chapter. I would recommend either reading through your chapter before posting to find errors like- Quittadge. Or, it might be easier to get a beta reader to read through it for you. Other than that, this was a good chapter and I'm glad to see Remus is Harry's new godfather.

    Author's Response: thank you for being so nice to me! and yes i will look over this chapet again and fix it.
Title: Healings begin 15 May 2008 4:32 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the ceremony was very well done, considering that Harry is not a child but an adolescent. I also like the idea that Sev will give him therapy he'd be the best one for the job!

    Author's Response:

    yeah...i wasn't sure how to do the ceremony but i got inspiration from your story (arista snape and the bronze dragons)  i didn't want to steal your idea but it gave me an idea.

    and yes, like you i felt snape was the best man for the job. thank you so much for the review!

Title: Reconciliation 12 May 2008 10:28 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter, good that harry has never got to go back to his relatives and that severus is helping somewhat

    Author's Response: thank you kreacher! i am glad you like the chapter!  yep harry is out of the hell hole and there is a bit more of this story to come!
Title: Reconciliation 12 May 2008 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Way to go!!! So Snape is a parseltongue! That's new to me.

    Author's Response:

    yeah...who knew?

     lol.

    thanx for the review!

Title: Reconciliation 11 May 2008 5:18 pm
Reviewer: Morgana_White (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape, a parselmouth? Interesting.

    I kinda hoped that Harry would stay with Severus... But I won't complain. Surely you have your reasons to choose Remus as Harry's guardian.

    Well, it was a great chapter. I hope we won't be waiting long for the next one :-)

    Author's Response:

    yes for the sake of this story he is a prsel mouth.

     as an author i tried to think outside of the box. and stories were Snape becomes guardian are everywhere. i am trying to be as original as possible!

    and if James were still alive he would want Remus to be Godfather in leau of Sirius' death.

     I hope to have the next chapter up soon!

Title: Reconciliation 11 May 2008 2:54 pm
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ....

    but...


    if Severus is a parselmouth, then why on earth didn't he just open the chamber to begin with and get Harry out? without going to the dursleys impersonating Harry?

    Author's Response:

    for the purpose of the challenge he needed to impersonate Harry first. that was the challenge and i was trying my best to adhere to it. thouge in retrospect that would have been a good plot to go with....maybe you should try the challenge too!

Title: Reconciliation 11 May 2008 8:50 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL... for once poor Snape *doesn't* get stuck with Harry?

    Great chapter.

    Author's Response: nope.  i did that because Snape is needed else where. His spying skills were still needed!
Title: Reconciliation 11 May 2008 7:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great chapter, I am so glad that Snape finally left, and that he has worked out his differences and problems with Harry in order to help him. You do need to go back and edit this, however. Several things need to be corrected:

    Snape did not give the ancient wizard time to respond.

    I was only there a few days..."     (Missing opening quotation marks)

    You are not the only Parcel tongue to attend Hogwarts..." Missing opening quotation marks, Parseltongue is spelled wrong.

    "...But you will not be going back to your uncle’s house. (Missing closing quotation marks)

    Stuff like that jar readers and it's difficult to enjoy the story as much. I love healing scenes and I can't wait to read your next chapter!!

    Author's Response: you're right of course...but in my defense, i wrote this at night and i am very sleepy at the moment...but i will of course fix the errors right away!
Title: Reconciliation 11 May 2008 7:13 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a bad chapter. However, I would recommend that you skim through it for errors. There are several parts where a quote wasn't used when Severus started speaking. Also the proper spelling is Parseltongue or Parselmouth. Other than those errors, the chapter was good!

    Author's Response: thanx i will fix it immeditately  and i am glad you like this story!

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