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Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 28 Apr 2008 5:48 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Really terrific! I'm dying to read more!

    Author's Response: more comming i promise
Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 23 Apr 2008 4:50 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I just stumbled into this story, and though I disaproove of abuse, I am finding I'm truly into this story. The scinereo is interesting, and I'm very curious as to what else he will have to go through this summer. Those evil Dursleys! >< Poor cat, er, I mean Professor. I hope you post the next chapter soon!

    Author's Response:

    i will as soon as the next chapter is ready!

Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 20 Apr 2008 2:45 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Sev ought to hex all of them into something nasty like toads or cockroaches and step on them --good and hard! Great job!

    Author's Response: why thank you...don't worry i really do have something planned for them!
Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 19 Apr 2008 11:51 pm
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely written. I'm sort of curious as to why Snape didn't magically clean the garage though? It would be done too quickly perhaps? Anyway, nice work. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    you guessed it.

    If severus finished too quickly, vernon would have been suspicious which could only lead to more trouble and you also forget that Snape is impersonating Harry and Harry is still bound by the rules reguarding under age sorcery.  thank you so much for the reviews!

Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 19 Apr 2008 6:26 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I like how Minerva entered the picture and how she'll hopefully bring help. Hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: i will update soon! just wait!
Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 19 Apr 2008 6:19 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this was great but poor severus, i do hope that the cat was minerva and has gone for help and that severus gets out soon and that harry never has to go back to his reletives

    Author's Response: yes poor severus! yes the cat was minerva, as for what happens next...well that is a surprise! see you next chapter and thanks for the review!
Title: Day One In the Hell Hole 19 Apr 2008 2:20 pm
Reviewer: Silent_Soliloquy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting! I don't think I have seen implement this particular idea for a story. It's always nice when assumptions are dispensed with totally and this definitely is huge "wake-up" call so to speak. Haha, now that Severus knows the full truth--I take it he will become extremely protective of the boy. Great Job!

    Author's Response:

    yes...i doubt Severus will think of potter the same way!  thank you so much for your review!

Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 19 Apr 2008 7:42 am
Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Must put more on soooooon! This is great. Good idea. Written well.

    Author's Response: i will. no worries! thank you for reading! i will update soon!
Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 16 Apr 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this sounded great when i read the bit about the story and it certainly hasn't disapointed me, i do feel very sorry for severus

    Author's Response:

    thank you...severus had much to learn!

Title: Meeting With the Headmaster 14 Apr 2008 12:57 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! So glad to see you posted one here!

    This is a very cool storyline and I'm eager to see where you go with it! I like how you started off contrasting Sev's past with Tobias and Vernon--since the two are very similar--both are mean abusive bastards. One question though, does Severus have his wand and can he use his magic to defend himself if Vernon tries to seriously hurt him? I'd say he should, if it becomes absolutely necessary, then he could beat the crap out of the damn guy! How do they plan to get Harry out of the chamber since nobody speaks Parseltongue?

    Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: thank you! yeah sev is in for a rude awakening!  i would think that since Snape is there to keep up appearances it would be odd if he always uses magic...so he will only be able to use magic for extreme circumstances. i wonder how sev will get along only on his wits! as for getting harry out of the chamber i believe that I will go the way of the DH and use Ron since he was there when he heard harry speak parseltounge....we will just have to see what happens!

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