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Reviews For Never Again!
Author's Response: Tobias was once a very bad alcoholic and he also had issues with anger management long ago. But the good thing is he's gone sober now and while he's still strict and can be nasty, he doesn;t do serious harm to Harry like he did to Severus. He threatens to use a belt but never does, though Harry does get spanked three times for being naughty. Evebtually Harry grows on his grandfather and he falls in love with him and it is harry who will try and get Sev and Tobias to reconcile.
You do a great job making everything clear and I can totally see Tobias as a Fatarse do-nothing type of man, poor, poor Harry! Wait...how old is Harry by the way? Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to know that. Yes, poor Harry is in for a rough time, in the beginning, though it does get better as you'll see. Harry is six in this story.
Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, Tobias has a mouth on him, though eventually he does tone it down! LOL.
Author's Response: I guess you sure can! And you'll see how Tobias reacts to harry in another few chapters!
Author's Response: Actually this was after it, but I didn't know about it until a friend told me she had come out with it in a press conference, so Tobias's description was totally off the cuff but accurate nevertheless!
Author's Response: Great and just keep reading!
sev is going to give birth to a cow when he wakes up and finds out where harry is I hope tobias doesn't hurt the kid Author's Response: Yes he sure is, poor guy!
Author's Response: No it isn't. Poor kid!
Also, please don't leave Severus in a coma for to long. a month or two or maybe three, but please not a year. Great chapter and I'm eagerily awaiting the next one! Author's Response: I won't leave Severus in a coma for a year, he isn't as badly hurt as all that. I was thinking maybe three months, but no longer than six. Glad you're enjoying this! I've also updated my other story tonight as well!
I find it hard to believe that Severus wouldn't've made alternate arrangements for child care in case he was unable to care for Harry. I don't know if you can fit this in your story, but it wouldn't surprise me if he had made arrangements in his will or some other legal document which has simply not come to light since he is not dead, but incapacitated. Regardless, Tobias hasn't even started in yet and I'm already hoping Severus will wake up soon! Author's Response: You're right and I was thinking along those lines, because Severus isn't stupid and the last thing he'd want is for his father to get custody of his son, but the Ministry jus took the easy way out--as they did in the books when they left JK's Harry with the Dursleys. I was going to mention the provisional guardian part when Severus finally regains consciousness, which won't be for a couple of chapters yet. |
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