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Title: The Unwanted Brat 09 May 2009 2:36 pm
Reviewer: Rebecca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well he better not hurt him!!! Because it's not fair!! I mean sure, my mum hits me sometimes but only like a slap on the hand nothing like the beating Snape used to get. i hope that he isn't abusive towards Harry.

    Author's Response: Tobias was once a very bad alcoholic and he also had issues with anger management long ago.  But the good thing is he's gone sober now and while he's still strict and can be nasty, he doesn;t do serious harm to Harry like he did to Severus.  He threatens to use a belt but never does, though Harry does get spanked three times for being naughty.  Evebtually Harry grows on his grandfather and he falls in love with him and it is harry who will try and get Sev and Tobias to reconcile. 
Title: The Unwanted Brat 17 Jun 2008 12:01 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG I'm terrified for Harry, I really am!
    You do a great job making everything clear and I can totally see Tobias as a Fatarse do-nothing type of man, poor, poor Harry!
    Wait...how old is Harry by the way?

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to know that.  Yes, poor Harry is in for a rough time, in the beginning, though it does get better as you'll see.  Harry is six in this story.
Title: The Unwanted Brat 03 Jun 2008 6:26 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Tsk, tsk. I hope Harry teaches Tobias something about cursing, "Gasp! I'm telling daddy on you, those are bad words!" Lol, (wink). Love it so far, you do the chatacters great!

    Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, Tobias has a mouth on him, though eventually he does tone it down! LOL.
Title: The Unwanted Brat 30 May 2008 9:41 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    How awesome, Snape is a physician. I can relate LOL! Clearly his dad has a lot of anger and resentment to work through, I hope he doesn't take it out on Harry.

    Author's Response: I guess you sure can!  And you'll see how Tobias reacts to harry in another few chapters!
Title: The Unwanted Brat 19 May 2008 7:17 am
Reviewer: Lily Elizabeth Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Tobias' impression of Dumbledore. Did you write this before or after Rowling said she'd envisioned Dumbledore as a gay man?

    Author's Response: Actually this was after it, but I didn't know about it until a friend told me she had come out with it in a press conference, so Tobias's description was totally off the cuff but accurate nevertheless!
Title: The Unwanted Brat 17 May 2008 4:09 am
Reviewer: MASTAxxSNAPE01 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    its so gud i dont wana type anythng else i wana kno wut hapens NXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BUT it was FREAKING AWESUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PS. AWESUM book AUNT KATHY

    Author's Response: Great and just keep reading!
Title: The Unwanted Brat 17 Apr 2008 11:38 pm
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    yikes

    sev is going to give birth to a cow when he wakes up and finds out where harry is

    I hope tobias doesn't hurt the kid

    Author's Response: Yes he sure is, poor guy!
Title: The Unwanted Brat 17 Apr 2008 1:44 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Nothing good for Harry.

    Author's Response: No it isn't.  Poor kid!
Title: The Unwanted Brat 15 Apr 2008 6:37 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I still don't know what to think about Tobias. I mean he's definitaly an ass, but I don't think he'll be abusive to Harry like he was Severus. Harry will worm his way into the mans heart as horridly cliche as that sounds.

    Also, please don't leave Severus in a coma for to long. a month or two or maybe three, but please not a year.

    Great chapter and I'm eagerily awaiting the next one!

    Author's Response: I won't leave Severus in a coma for a year, he isn't as badly hurt as all that.  I was thinking maybe three months, but no longer than six.  Glad you're enjoying this! I've also updated my other story tonight as well!
Title: The Unwanted Brat 15 Apr 2008 6:01 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Tobias is a walking, talking caricature of a child beater. This doesn't bode well for poor little Harry :(

    I find it hard to believe that Severus wouldn't've made alternate arrangements for child care in case he was unable to care for Harry. I don't know if you can fit this in your story, but it wouldn't surprise me if he had made arrangements in his will or some other legal document which has simply not come to light since he is not dead, but incapacitated. Regardless, Tobias hasn't even started in yet and I'm already hoping Severus will wake up soon!

    Author's Response: You're right and I was thinking along those lines, because Severus isn't stupid and the last thing he'd want is for his father to get custody of his son, but the Ministry jus took the easy way out--as they did in the books when they left JK's Harry with the Dursleys.  I was going to mention the provisional guardian part when Severus finally regains consciousness, which won't be for a couple of chapters yet. 

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