I love how you portray Sev & Harry and how well you write Severus as a doctor. It's very true to life and believable. Poor harry though. Tobias really needs to take a chill pill.
Author's Response: Yes, he does! I'm glad you like my portrayal of Severus, I had some help there from my sister, who is also a doctor.
| Title: Boys Don't Cry
| 17 May 2008 5:24 am
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| Reviewer: MASTAxxSNAPE01 (Anonymous)
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at least tobias is warming up to harry. once again great wurk aunt kathy and i know all ur snape/harry buks will be published
Author's Response: Aww, you're sweet Vince! And yes, finally Toby is starting to like Harry.
oh well it seems toby has a bit of backstory to work out for himself so that could be interesting and harry seems to remember his parents love him and thats also good
Poor kid - I want to cry- your fics feel real snapegirl!
Author's Response: Yes, and you'll be learning more about Toby's backstory in a few chapters and I'm glad you like it.
tobias is such a bastard i hope when sev wakes up, that tobias gets his arse kicked!
Author's Response: Oh, well, you'll see what Sev does when he gets up. It's going to be very explosive!
| Title: Boys Don't Cry
| 17 Apr 2008 3:25 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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Great job on this chapter - I really like the way it shows how Tobias acts, and that it's been handed down. And I love the way you show Harry's thought process, especially this line:
'Sometimes his dad said Lord God but Harry was pretty sure nobody had killed Jesus lately.'
Author's Response: Yes, and that was my favorite line there too, glad somebody else out there shares my sense of humor.
wow poor Harry, it really looks like Severus is going to have his work cut out for him reversing the damage done by his father. Really looking forward to see where this is headed next. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES
Author's Response: Yes, he certainly does and I'm working on the next chapter tonight! In the meantime, I'm posting the new one for Prisoner, so you cna read it if you'd like!
good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
| Title: Boys Don't Cry
| 17 Apr 2008 1:53 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Great story so far, even though Tobias is still an ass, but maybe he'll change!
Author's Response: One can always hope! Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Boys Don't Cry
| 17 Apr 2008 1:51 am
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Oh man, is Tobias softening just a little? Poor Harry having to recall that awful day when his father was nearly killed. And I loved the part with the shots and Severus giving him candy, it was sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks and that's one of my favorite parts too!
And there will be Hell to pay when Severus does wake up.
Altough, it seems as if Tobias is the way he is because it was the way he was raised. Maybe Harry can break the cycle.
Author's Response: Yes there will indeed and that is partly true and Harry will play a major role in turning Tobias's attitude around.
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