Well, I can't say I'm surprised at Tobias's punishment, although Harry did deserve it for going and searching through his private things. Loved the scene with the angels at the end, that was so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you, I was wondering if anyone else would notice the angel part, I thought it'd be a sweet thing to put in there!
Tobias thinking and regretting - beautiful!
Author's Response: Yes, indeed, and he will regret what he's done to Severus even more, eventually! Thanks for your reviews.
| Title: Like Father Like Son
| 17 May 2008 5:55 am
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| Reviewer: MASTAxxSNAPE01 (Anonymous)
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it hade anger and luv init and empathy. great story so far
Author's Response: Thanks and hope you enjoy the rest!
Ok I am loving this story! Great use of emotions through words!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I try very hard to make my readers feel what my characters feel and experience what they do.
| Title: Like Father Like Son
| 27 Apr 2008 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I like the way you change Tobias and how your change his own thinking about himself, er, his perception of his own past, I mean. Little Sun
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really wanted to do something different here! And Tobias is an interesting character to experiment with.
| Title: Like Father Like Son
| 18 Apr 2008 7:46 am
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I like your new story and the way it's going so far. I am glad you it hasn't generated in to abuse, that you gave Tobias emotion, (many stories feature him as an evil monster like ol' snake face), and that he regrets his actions. Not only that, but he is learning from his mistakes, and I think with time he could be a proper grandpa (as long as Sev allows him near Harry, of course). Harry is already worming his way into his heart. :) I shall look forward to more, and I can't wait to see Sev's reaction to Harry staying with Tobias.
Author's Response: Thanks, I try very hard to make my characters more than two dimensional and Tobias was a difficult nut to crack, but now that he's come out of his shell, I find him interesting to write about. Sev's reaction will be coming up soon!
I love that Tobias is starting to like harry. I can't wait until sev wakes up. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Sev should be waking up in another two chapters and the next chapter will feature more Harry-Tobias bonding.
Oh, *great* job with Tobias in this chapter. You are really bringing this character to life and I like what I see.
Author's Response: Thanks and just wait until you see what happens in the next chapter. More of Tobias's past is revealed.
wow
this is absolutely amazing
I cannot wait to see how this all plays out for these men- this is gonna be something else!!
Author's Response: Thanks bren, and I hope you like the next few chapters!
| Title: Like Father Like Son
| 18 Apr 2008 3:22 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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Great job on this chapter; I really like the way you show that Tobias has changed, but that you haven't made him all sunshine and light once he's off the alcohol. He's a different person, but he's still got a temper. You've done a really good job on showing how Harry thinks as well (he's not super intelligent or far too mature for his age like in some stories) and I can't wait to see how he reacts the next day.
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you like it. I've always thought kids should be kids, which is how I tend to protray them in my stories, with or without special powers. And it wouldn't be realisitic for Tobias to be all happy, since he still is a strict and demanding person, though he is slowly starting to love his grandson.
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